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Witch (Hot Potato Version)
This is the "Hot Potato" continuation to a poem
written by author Nikkimoe.
At the end of this poem you the reader will be tossed the
Hot Potato. Read at your own risk.
The Poetic Hot Potato Passes to the author.
... We find our witch on a bed of leaves,
...Dead leaves, that is,
A sorry witch
submitting to
relenting to
her fate
Judged and sentenced
By God Triton
Horrific crimes
seen through the lense
Of the known Universe
Became trivial
in the light of day
of an unknown one
a hidden realm
An Under World of light
In the darkest forgotten corner,
fresh breezy air
Bees singing in flowers
Trees with figs for the picking
Beds of soft blue grass
Fairies to mend aches and pains
This was the creation and realm
of the hairy beast who climbed his
way through a rabbit hole a portal
to the ground beneath the bed of dead leaves
For he was called to claim her
to wrestle this suffering soul
from her sealed fate
From those who revel in
her certain death
for in death and life
Nothing is certain
The beast, born through his freshly conjured
crevice opening connecting, however briefly,
his universe to that of the witch in distress
startles her as he whisks by her and she falls
down the rabbit hole
falling down
spiraling
down the open hole connecting
her universe to the Unkown
His brief exposure to vulnerability
In responding to this cry of remorse
The Beast begins his sermon at the feet
of God Triton
What is punishment?
but a primeval urge
to kill and destroy
An act by the accuser
as heinous as the accused
The beast Shouts to distract his opponent
Angered, Triton raises his conch to his lips
calling the Ocean to drown this intruder,
Triton's waves rush to engulf
and Drown his underworld thus opened
Enjoying a fresh splash,
Down flies the beast spiraling
down to his newly falliing witch
down the rabbit hole
catching, landing her gently
into his underworld of light
Her crimes against men's hearts and
smashed relationships and lost children
and wretched hexes and spells cast onto
the innocent
became as innocent as just another color in
a beautiful rainbow
and frivolous
as if a jaywalking ticket
for crossing the rainbow
In his Underworld
a sun that shone bright
the air breathed fresh
Darius, the hairy beast,
King and shepherd whose gift is
creation and vanishment of conjured rabbit holes,
portals briefly opened to alternate worlds
then closed
had already sealed out the world
of the witches past
What evil could there possibly be
in this poor witch, which he now lay down on a
bed of fine kentucky blue grass with a horse at her disposal by their side.
What possible mischief could
this fair witch be capable
in Darius' garden of
harmony and light
Honey and Lime
What possible mischief
could lie behind her
deep green eyes
into which he stared
transfixed...
...OK, reader, Catch the Hot Potato!
... your turn!!!
written by author Nikkimoe.
At the end of this poem you the reader will be tossed the
Hot Potato. Read at your own risk.
The Poetic Hot Potato Passes to the author.
... We find our witch on a bed of leaves,
...Dead leaves, that is,
A sorry witch
submitting to
relenting to
her fate
Judged and sentenced
By God Triton
Horrific crimes
seen through the lense
Of the known Universe
Became trivial
in the light of day
of an unknown one
a hidden realm
An Under World of light
In the darkest forgotten corner,
fresh breezy air
Bees singing in flowers
Trees with figs for the picking
Beds of soft blue grass
Fairies to mend aches and pains
This was the creation and realm
of the hairy beast who climbed his
way through a rabbit hole a portal
to the ground beneath the bed of dead leaves
For he was called to claim her
to wrestle this suffering soul
from her sealed fate
From those who revel in
her certain death
for in death and life
Nothing is certain
The beast, born through his freshly conjured
crevice opening connecting, however briefly,
his universe to that of the witch in distress
startles her as he whisks by her and she falls
down the rabbit hole
falling down
spiraling
down the open hole connecting
her universe to the Unkown
His brief exposure to vulnerability
In responding to this cry of remorse
The Beast begins his sermon at the feet
of God Triton
What is punishment?
but a primeval urge
to kill and destroy
An act by the accuser
as heinous as the accused
The beast Shouts to distract his opponent
Angered, Triton raises his conch to his lips
calling the Ocean to drown this intruder,
Triton's waves rush to engulf
and Drown his underworld thus opened
Enjoying a fresh splash,
Down flies the beast spiraling
down to his newly falliing witch
down the rabbit hole
catching, landing her gently
into his underworld of light
Her crimes against men's hearts and
smashed relationships and lost children
and wretched hexes and spells cast onto
the innocent
became as innocent as just another color in
a beautiful rainbow
and frivolous
as if a jaywalking ticket
for crossing the rainbow
In his Underworld
a sun that shone bright
the air breathed fresh
Darius, the hairy beast,
King and shepherd whose gift is
creation and vanishment of conjured rabbit holes,
portals briefly opened to alternate worlds
then closed
had already sealed out the world
of the witches past
What evil could there possibly be
in this poor witch, which he now lay down on a
bed of fine kentucky blue grass with a horse at her disposal by their side.
What possible mischief could
this fair witch be capable
in Darius' garden of
harmony and light
Honey and Lime
What possible mischief
could lie behind her
deep green eyes
into which he stared
transfixed...
...OK, reader, Catch the Hot Potato!
... your turn!!!
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