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Obits...turn to page 2
Will I die unexpectedly,
just like it says in the obits...
he died at home watching t.v.
unexpectedly,
or will it read,he went
peacefully
surrounded by his family
or maybe it will be
accidentally,
the ink might say...
Driving home from work one day.
Or maybe the story will state,
He fought a long hard battle
courageously...
he was one hell of a mate.
But if I were able to pen the words
that'll grace the page
that day, the words would say,
"It was old age."
just like it says in the obits...
he died at home watching t.v.
unexpectedly,
or will it read,he went
peacefully
surrounded by his family
or maybe it will be
accidentally,
the ink might say...
Driving home from work one day.
Or maybe the story will state,
He fought a long hard battle
courageously...
he was one hell of a mate.
But if I were able to pen the words
that'll grace the page
that day, the words would say,
"It was old age."
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Re: Deaths...turn to page 3.
12th Feb 2014 1:46am
passed away peacefully in his
sleep, aged one hundred and six...
at least..:)
sleep, aged one hundred and six...
at least..:)
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12th Feb 2014 2:29pm
Yup, that's exactly how I'd perfer it that way I can have a chance to see my child grow up with family n whatnot... Somber subject but a necessary reality bro.
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12th Feb 2014 10:28pm
Yes sir my brother...raise our glasses high and toast to a long and happy life :)
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2014 5:50pm
"Bitch never knew what hit her" - yeah, I could *live* with that one. Rarely does death bring a smile - you did that. Thanks Hashman!
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12th Feb 2014 10:30pm
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Anonymous
15th Feb 2014 8:51pm
'it was old age', that just made me pause and think. What is age? for some it could be any age when the time comes, for them that could be 'old', the last number assigned to them.
Mr. Hash this is sublime and so thoughtful, thank you.
Mr. Hash this is sublime and so thoughtful, thank you.
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15th Feb 2014 9:50pm