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Winter Evening
Winter evening, tapestry of stars,from
her bedroom window they twinkle
outside, white fleece blankets the earth
and the pale moon takes her shape,
glowing with a silvery blue light around her
nude body,as if in a nightly dance,
wanting to crawl along her edges and
hold on tight around her curves.
her bedroom window they twinkle
outside, white fleece blankets the earth
and the pale moon takes her shape,
glowing with a silvery blue light around her
nude body,as if in a nightly dance,
wanting to crawl along her edges and
hold on tight around her curves.
Published 12th Feb 2014
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12th Feb 2014 00:54am
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12th Feb 2014 1:17pm
12th Feb 2014 00:55am
Love the dreamscape and atmosphere you created with this Tommie. Colors and images of astral sensuality in the moon light.
12th Feb 2014 1:19pm
Your words are very much appreciated Jake, I am thankful to you for your eyes and opinion. :)
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12th Feb 2014 3:45am
If I could make a snow man, it would not be a snow man at all
it would be the shape of her curves just as how i would imagine it laying beside me on this winter evening.
beautiful words Ms. Tommie Lynn
it would be the shape of her curves just as how i would imagine it laying beside me on this winter evening.
beautiful words Ms. Tommie Lynn
12th Feb 2014 1:23pm
That's a nice picture Watcher...very nice.Thank you for reading and your amazing words. :)
12th Feb 2014 4:33am
subtle but steaming for this lonely boy in the night...
the blue silver moon skin of her every curve paints her without a touch, i throw away all my brushes, this canvas
must be painted with all of me
the blue silver moon skin of her every curve paints her without a touch, i throw away all my brushes, this canvas
must be painted with all of me
12th Feb 2014 1:25pm
Now your talking Semaj! Who needs brushes anyway? ;)
Thank you for reading and your wonderful comment. :)
Thank you for reading and your wonderful comment. :)
12th Feb 2014 1:49pm
too docile
a person
i,hence shall not comment
am a clueless poet
but compose at times
rarely but
excellent
a person
i,hence shall not comment
am a clueless poet
but compose at times
rarely but
excellent
12th Feb 2014 2:22pm
Outstanding imagery, n wow sounds like the scene
outside my window! lol nice ink T!
outside my window! lol nice ink T!
12th Feb 2014 2:28pm
