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Night and Day
Behold! Sun's fiery passion burns
Painted alive the canvas that defines earth
Oh colour! Slowly bleeding sky
Bruised and devastated, sun passing by
Oh! hungry moon yearning. Reign!
Cling desperately to little remains
Oh stars shimmer so distant yet bold
Paltry comparison.
-Behold!-
Comparison paltry
Bold yet distant. So, shimmer stars! Oh!
Remains! Little to desperately cling
Reign! Yearning moon hungry. Oh!
By passing sun, devastated and bruised
Sky bleeding slowly. Colour! Oh!
Earth defines that canvas the alive painted
Burns passion! Fiery Sun's! Behold!
Published 11th Feb 2014
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29th Mar 2014 4:13pm
"Sun's fiery passion burns" - i like that idea.
Check out my "The Sky is a Woman", the first or second one i did. I have the sky kneeling over me as I'm lying on my back. She puts her love-maker -- the sun -- in (or above) my face.
Check out my "The Sky is a Woman", the first or second one i did. I have the sky kneeling over me as I'm lying on my back. She puts her love-maker -- the sun -- in (or above) my face.
