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Last Night As You Laid Naked, Your Snoring Kept Me Up
I enjoy the awkward mornings
When we put on last nights clothes
And walk out my door to see my grandfather
Drinking his coffee, extra black with two ice cubes.
You rush out the door saying good morning.
I give him a devilish smile knowing very well
He will be letting me have an ear full later that day.
But then I think to myself of last nights fun
And how we played repeat in the morning,
Realizing why it was all so worth it.
When we put on last nights clothes
And walk out my door to see my grandfather
Drinking his coffee, extra black with two ice cubes.
You rush out the door saying good morning.
I give him a devilish smile knowing very well
He will be letting me have an ear full later that day.
But then I think to myself of last nights fun
And how we played repeat in the morning,
Realizing why it was all so worth it.
Published 9th Feb 2014
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9th Feb 2014 9:00pm
This poem really captures the enmeshment between two lovers and its commitment. leaves a lovely sense of calm
9th Feb 2014 9:16pm
9th Feb 2014 9:52pm
yes- i do like this-it has rythmn and flows and is delightful in it's honesty.
9th Feb 2014 11:42pm
11th Feb 2014 7:45pm
