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Goodbye
I tore my throat screaming after loneliness.
She glided in military formation,
black dress dancing in the wind toward the hills.
On the precipice of falling out of sight,
she turned to wave goodbye
and a single tear invaded my cheek as she disappeared forever.
She glided in military formation,
black dress dancing in the wind toward the hills.
On the precipice of falling out of sight,
she turned to wave goodbye
and a single tear invaded my cheek as she disappeared forever.
Published 9th Feb 2014
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12th Feb 2014 1:36pm
How does this beautiful work of art have 15 reads and NO comments?!
This is simply beautiful and beautifully simple.
Almost dream- like, i pictured the scenario in my mind.
lovely xx
This is simply beautiful and beautifully simple.
Almost dream- like, i pictured the scenario in my mind.
lovely xx
12th Feb 2014 9:50pm
3rd Jun 2014 5:05pm
could you write more? i like your style very much :P more poems please is what i mean :D
4th Jun 2014 11:24pm
