Eternal

Nice job tommie this was a great poem.

Thank you JWA :)

glistening verse

sparkly write

Appreciate you reading PS :)

I absolutely love the piece! The symbolism of the tranquil flow outside and the current allowed to rage within is marvelous. Bravisima mia bella amica :)

Your visits always cheer me up GW! Thank you so much. :)

ooh how blinding this is as I hear the ripples of her river peaceful flow

flowed like a river
with no end or beginning
inside she raged like the rapids
letting the current run wild

I love this ^^^ beautiful lines

Your kind words are always appreciated BS.. I thank you :)

dat's a long tyme & nyce won missy rM

Thanks Roach. :)

You rock girl!