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Rough Work Week
Pragmatic
But still able to feel
Rough work week
Spent and tired
Days between stations
Desire had to wait
Stony exterior starting to melt
Will you ease me down from the madness?
Don’t ask for much
But when I do
Will you come running
Or will it just be Monday
All over again?
Poet Note: This is one of the first poems I wrote when I started
writing about 14 months ago. It's still one of my favorites for simplicity and message. Hope you enjoy and can identify with it too.
But still able to feel
Rough work week
Spent and tired
Days between stations
Desire had to wait
Stony exterior starting to melt
Will you ease me down from the madness?
Don’t ask for much
But when I do
Will you come running
Or will it just be Monday
All over again?
Poet Note: This is one of the first poems I wrote when I started
writing about 14 months ago. It's still one of my favorites for simplicity and message. Hope you enjoy and can identify with it too.
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Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 2:19pm
Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 2:21pm
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7th Feb 2014 3:18pm
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Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 3:35pm
Favorite line: "will you ease me down from the madness?"
Yea, that was poetic for me! n hey who couldn't indentify with a hard day of work, possibly leading to a 'hard' time at home? lol
Yea, that was poetic for me! n hey who couldn't indentify with a hard day of work, possibly leading to a 'hard' time at home? lol
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Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 4:28pm
Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 6:01pm
i think this is a message not often heard or acted on in our fast paced lives.
wonderfully written and so relatable
wonderfully written and so relatable
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Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 7:07pm
Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 10:33pm
You write what many should utter aloud:
I'm spent but I love you and would like
to take you in my arms and hold you if not for ...
Beautifully penned, Speak.
I'm spent but I love you and would like
to take you in my arms and hold you if not for ...
Beautifully penned, Speak.
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Re: Rough Work Week
7th Feb 2014 10:39pm
Thanks Miss Chi
This poem is universal to the population.
We all need to be soothed down at some point.
xx
This poem is universal to the population.
We all need to be soothed down at some point.
xx
Re: Rough Work Week
8th Feb 2014 3:47pm
Re: Rough Work Week
8th Feb 2014 3:52pm
Re: Rough Work Week
10th Feb 2014 7:00am
Its simplicity is what makes it so great. While reading it, I felt like i was in front of the speaker. I like poems that transport you.
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Re: Rough Work Week
10th Feb 2014 12:13pm