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Just keep falling....
Ever feel like your falling?
and it just keeps going, or coming
i cant tell
i reach out for something to catch
but all i get is that uneasy feeling
the one were you know it just wont stop
i cant see the bottom, but i know its spike-filled
and theres no way to stop this decent
and then it happens, i hit the endall
and suddenly i wake in a sweat
then i look over, and see her with me
and i start to fall all over again
and it just keeps going, or coming
i cant tell
i reach out for something to catch
but all i get is that uneasy feeling
the one were you know it just wont stop
i cant see the bottom, but i know its spike-filled
and theres no way to stop this decent
and then it happens, i hit the endall
and suddenly i wake in a sweat
then i look over, and see her with me
and i start to fall all over again
Published 21st Feb 2011
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1st Mar 2012 9:53pm
okay, this was written teribly well. And in the beginning I loved the, "it just keeps going, or coming." That was stellar. I also loved how this entire time I thought it had to be interpreted as a negative sort of falling but then I finished it and decided it didn't indefinitely have to be considered negative.. Got me thinking, fantastic job.(:
