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Freedom
White rain
piercing the skin,
Unbearable sound
breaking the silence,
Smelling of blood
she raises her hand,
Sliced from the vein
the liquid feels warm,
The weight of her head
is too much to bare,
Breathing is labored
almost nonexistent,
Remembering the face
all she can see are eyes,
Dark brown almost black
no soul behind them,
Fear consumes her mind,
as her body trembles
Vision goes black,
life is lost
piercing the skin,
Unbearable sound
breaking the silence,
Smelling of blood
she raises her hand,
Sliced from the vein
the liquid feels warm,
The weight of her head
is too much to bare,
Breathing is labored
almost nonexistent,
Remembering the face
all she can see are eyes,
Dark brown almost black
no soul behind them,
Fear consumes her mind,
as her body trembles
Vision goes black,
life is lost
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