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Night Song Danger
Passing the ranch in Glendale
makes me remember for a time that
I rode the holy hyw, smelt the
song of God, tasted the sound of the
devil and lived the Phoenix breeze.
Phoenix was a seed for demons to nurture
in the sky, with a sun that blazed so
clear and warm it looked fake, until you got to
know its fire.
makes me remember for a time that
I rode the holy hyw, smelt the
song of God, tasted the sound of the
devil and lived the Phoenix breeze.
Phoenix was a seed for demons to nurture
in the sky, with a sun that blazed so
clear and warm it looked fake, until you got to
know its fire.
Published 20th Feb 2011
| Edited 21st Feb 2011
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21st Feb 2011 00:38am
"hyw", "untill" !!!
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all you have to do is paste the poem into any edit box on DU to see these typos.
OR,
use this free really simple on-line text editor with spell checking:
http://www.editpad.org/
OR,
use Google's free one with spell checking and bunches of cool options:
https://docs.google.com
OR,
download this free, wonderfully simple word processor with spell checking:
http://www.abisource.com/
OR,
jeez, if you want an incredibly great Microsoft file compatible free office
suite with word processing, spreadsheet, presentation, graphic editor, database,
and (of course) a spell/grammar checker:
http://www.openoffice.org/
21st Feb 2011 1:55am
The double L is a typo (thanks for catching that)but "hwy" is supposed to be that way. I saw it spelt like that somewhere and took to using it as such.
Cheers
Cheers
oh, as long as it's intentional...
this, of course, is what i love about poetry.
BTW: you missed out on the chance to tell me "untill" was intentional as well.
As John Wayne's character: Captain Nathan Brittles said:
"Never apologize son, it's a sign of weakness." :)
this, of course, is what i love about poetry.
BTW: you missed out on the chance to tell me "untill" was intentional as well.
As John Wayne's character: Captain Nathan Brittles said:
"Never apologize son, it's a sign of weakness." :)
Weakness is in the mind. Everyone makes mistakes. Anyway I could have lied but I don't relish being a bullshit artist.
Peace,
Crowe123
Peace,
Crowe123
22nd Feb 2011 2:35am
22nd Feb 2011 7:18am
hey, no problem.
if you should change your mind, i'm always willing
to take you back.
if you should change your mind, i'm always willing
to take you back.
10th Jul 2012 3:37am
