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Jerkin Off
Eleven reads, no comments, Twenty reads, no comments. How dare you. We reach inside ourselves, to our cores. And express our feelings to apathetic ears, needing to make an emotional connection in our isolation. Your silence are like razors. Lost in your narcisstic world of words, you are blind, pompous and judgmental. Its all just a circle jerk to blow your own load.
Published 31st Jan 2014
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31st Jan 2014 8:10pm
That's true and not true.
I wrote a poem yesterday called "Masturbation Frenzy" about actual jerking off. I got comments.
So, here is a comment.
I wrote a poem yesterday called "Masturbation Frenzy" about actual jerking off. I got comments.
So, here is a comment.
9th Feb 2014 6:04pm
I feel your pain!People read and read,some may like it,some may comment,I wish they'd fucking critique the shit!Sure I write to vent,In truth I write to prevent,To stop my self from fucking someone up,They read and read without showing love.What the fuck!
