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Can't judge a book by its cover,
Or a soul by its skin.
Is this "real"?
Of course not.
It's only what you Perceive
The truth is,
the only real things
Are the ones you cannot
See
or Touch
Taste
or Smell
Hear
or Perceive
Or a soul by its skin.
Is this "real"?
Of course not.
It's only what you Perceive
The truth is,
the only real things
Are the ones you cannot
See
or Touch
Taste
or Smell
Hear
or Perceive
Published 19th Feb 2011
| Edited 30th Mar 2011
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19th Feb 2011 10:39pm
I'm very satisfied with this poem. What do you (YES, you!) think of it? What did it make you think/feel?
-Peace Love and Poetry,
Daisy Ann Kyriss
-Peace Love and Poetry,
Daisy Ann Kyriss
20th Feb 2011 3:53am
Wow Daisy! I absolutely love this! the line,"Can't judge a book by it's cover, or a soul by it's skin"! its so amazing
Anonymous
29th Mar 2011 10:11pm
I don't normally like creative capitalisation as I find it confusing and a mess, but with the senses you've made into nouns at the end it works well for me, creating a bubble like effect as the reader floats towards "Perceive". I'd recommend that you make "real" lower case though, and for the sake of consistency capitalise the first "perceive". Also in that fifth line "Its" needs an apostrophe, as you're using it to abbreviate "it is".
Otherwise smashing poem.
Otherwise smashing poem.
8th Jan 2012 00:23am
I love coming across poems like this always brings me a smile thanks for the inspiration ;)
17th Feb 2013 1:02pm
