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Sillage
The air carries your scent
Like a ribbon dancer
Twisting, twirling, engulfing
Gentle feather touches ...
Permeate my clothes
Flush my cheeks
Brighten my eyes
Ignite my skin
Like a flame without
Her spark,
Just ‘on’...
That’s what trails behind
When you walk away...
Like a ribbon dancer
Twisting, twirling, engulfing
Gentle feather touches ...
Permeate my clothes
Flush my cheeks
Brighten my eyes
Ignite my skin
Like a flame without
Her spark,
Just ‘on’...
That’s what trails behind
When you walk away...
Published 30th Jan 2014
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30th Jan 2014 9:27am
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30th Jan 2014 1:24pm
31st Jan 2014 6:36am
Tantalizing!
Your words are tickling my senses! The 'ribbon dancer'...clever use of simile!
Sensual scents linger--both delicately, and powerfully...just like your words, my Friend! Ox
Your words are tickling my senses! The 'ribbon dancer'...clever use of simile!
Sensual scents linger--both delicately, and powerfully...just like your words, my Friend! Ox
31st Jan 2014 6:37am
Thanks!! the 'ribbon dancer' was the image that popped into my head when I was thinking how the perfume dances around me.
Something soft and gentle this time x
Something soft and gentle this time x
30th Jan 2014 7:54pm
Beautiful imagery, Heart!
Your pen's voice is so delicate and tender. Love it! Xo
Your pen's voice is so delicate and tender. Love it! Xo
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