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Confused
I'm confused on what I'm doing.
I'm confused on what I've dreamt of.
I'm confused on who I'm pursuing.
Because I'm unaware how to love.
I'm confused on where I'm going.
I'm scared of what is there.
I hate to be unknowing.
On what my future bears.
I'm confused on why I stay awake,
When there is nothing on my mind.
I'm confused on why my stomach aches.
When I look back in time.
I am confused about life.
I am confused about death.
I will probably be confused.
Until I take my last breath.
-Cydney Loren'
I'm confused on what I've dreamt of.
I'm confused on who I'm pursuing.
Because I'm unaware how to love.
I'm confused on where I'm going.
I'm scared of what is there.
I hate to be unknowing.
On what my future bears.
I'm confused on why I stay awake,
When there is nothing on my mind.
I'm confused on why my stomach aches.
When I look back in time.
I am confused about life.
I am confused about death.
I will probably be confused.
Until I take my last breath.
-Cydney Loren'
Published 29th Jan 2014
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30th Jan 2014 5:35am
Confusion leads us through the tunnel of life that allows us clarity. Well written Poet.
31st Jan 2014 2:12am
10th Feb 2014 00:33am
I agree with Stormy N. and add, the fact that you
delve inside yourself for the answers speaks volumes
about you, I'm sure confusion will be a temporary
state on many subjects as you will indeed find the answers
as you carry on in your life. :) your rhyming
was spot on, n so too was your formatting
I don't think you truly needed a period after every line
but it was refreshing to see what appears to be a very 'polished' writer :)
delve inside yourself for the answers speaks volumes
about you, I'm sure confusion will be a temporary
state on many subjects as you will indeed find the answers
as you carry on in your life. :) your rhyming
was spot on, n so too was your formatting
I don't think you truly needed a period after every line
but it was refreshing to see what appears to be a very 'polished' writer :)
10th Feb 2014 4:11pm
Thank you so much, I have to work on my formatting and all I've been writing for a while but I have only been sharing them for about a month. Thank you for your input(:
