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Because Our Hearts Are Unfiltered
I share a soul with you
In your darkest place
With no hope
I am there
And you become my greatest source of light
And I yours
In your darkest place
With no hope
I am there
And you become my greatest source of light
And I yours
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Re: Because Our Hearts Are Unfiltered
28th Jan 2014 9:09am
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28th Jan 2014 12:09pm
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Re: Because Our Hearts Are Unfiltered
28th Jan 2014 1:34pm
re: Re: Because Our Hearts Are Unfiltered
29th Jan 2014 2:04am
Thank you PoetSpeak. I think the title is stronger because it was originally a line in the poem until I shortened it.
Re: Because Our Hearts Are Unfiltered
28th Jan 2014 9:33pm
...even the dimmest light can brighten up the darkest space. Love this, Swiss...Xo
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29th Jan 2014 2:05am
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29th Jan 2014 2:07am
Thank you Heart. Sometimes I write from a space where the choice of words is simple and that works best. Thank you for adding this to your reading list.
Re: Because Our Hearts Are Unfiltered
1st Feb 2014 1:18am
Through the deepest darkness, the heart-lites of of soulmates shine the brightest....guiding each other forward....
A stirring scribe!
Inspiring Ink, mo Chara! ox
A stirring scribe!
Inspiring Ink, mo Chara! ox
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