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Wingless
You can have my love
Pull my wings off
Make me yours
Capture my voice
Listen to how I die
I was never real
Pull my wings off
Make me yours
Capture my voice
Listen to how I die
I was never real
Published 27th Jan 2014
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27th Jan 2014 2:07pm
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27th Jan 2014 4:32pm
Keep your wings...you will need them to soar to even greater heights of thermal-riding passion, higher altitudes of love :)
You have captured well the sacrifice that love requires and that what was thought to be love is merely an artifice. Well done Tommie!
You have captured well the sacrifice that love requires and that what was thought to be love is merely an artifice. Well done Tommie!
27th Jan 2014 7:07pm
Always value your opinion GW...I appreciate your thoughts Thank you very much. :)
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28th Jan 2014 2:14am
Well thank you very much Jswiss...always appreciate your words and thanks for the RL add.
28th Jan 2014 4:31am
