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Real Beauty...
Trust, I’ve been around awhile
heard many a story told
'bout these beings, we call woman...
and yet for me it never gets old
to try an express my admiration,
for woman, and her beauty...
See...it’s true that while,
we as guys often act fruity
over the physicality of the fairer sex
we usually want more
than we should
hope or expect...
Yet, it should be duly noted ,
In fact it’s often quoted
that some of us guys actually
love women
for what’s on the inside...
now pause,
and think about that…
okay I speak, I don’t hide
my feelings toward
they who should be placed high...
at times even I
wonder why am I
so in- tune when they cry?
Maybe it comes from my mother
I don’t know,
but I’m learning to embrace it
just know i'm not afraid to face it
It's wonderful
to see a woman
who exudes beauty
on the inside
walking around regal
so full of pride...
And I swear,I’m not shallow
but I love a "physically"
beautiful woman as well, that’s right
you know the kind
that'll keep you up at night?
All and all, they on the ball
keeping up with the kids,
and home-shopping
or at the mall
Pleasing their man…
well the best they can
and as you all should know
none of it comes easy
we need to show them much love
god knows I do... it pleases me
So I say it from my heart
now let’s all stand, and cheer
for the beauty of a REAL woman
is something precious, and dear!
heard many a story told
'bout these beings, we call woman...
and yet for me it never gets old
to try an express my admiration,
for woman, and her beauty...
See...it’s true that while,
we as guys often act fruity
over the physicality of the fairer sex
we usually want more
than we should
hope or expect...
Yet, it should be duly noted ,
In fact it’s often quoted
that some of us guys actually
love women
for what’s on the inside...
now pause,
and think about that…
okay I speak, I don’t hide
my feelings toward
they who should be placed high...
at times even I
wonder why am I
so in- tune when they cry?
Maybe it comes from my mother
I don’t know,
but I’m learning to embrace it
just know i'm not afraid to face it
It's wonderful
to see a woman
who exudes beauty
on the inside
walking around regal
so full of pride...
And I swear,I’m not shallow
but I love a "physically"
beautiful woman as well, that’s right
you know the kind
that'll keep you up at night?
All and all, they on the ball
keeping up with the kids,
and home-shopping
or at the mall
Pleasing their man…
well the best they can
and as you all should know
none of it comes easy
we need to show them much love
god knows I do... it pleases me
So I say it from my heart
now let’s all stand, and cheer
for the beauty of a REAL woman
is something precious, and dear!
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Re: Real Beauty...
27th Jan 2014 3:35am
Standing ovation sweety! :) You recognize the real beauty of a woman! This piece is grand! Xo
Pen love~
Pen love~
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27th Jan 2014 4:51am
My sweet Rain, thank you! I'm happy you liked this
n I'm grateful as always for your support :)
n I'm grateful as always for your support :)
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27th Jan 2014 4:04am
You really got me with this one and I enjoyed your tribute to the beauty of real women and the fact that you are not afraid to be in tune with them while also appreciating their physical beauty...... great poem! I am smitten and in love. ;) <3
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27th Jan 2014 4:56am
Aaaawww, c'mere n jet me kiss you! lol
Thank you my sweetie pie always a pleasure
for your visits n words are welcome!
Truly thank you for the support was :)
Thank you my sweetie pie always a pleasure
for your visits n words are welcome!
Truly thank you for the support was :)
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2014 4:10am
Oh yes!!! You get a bravo from me. I stand with Rain as well and salute you for this beautiful piece. Enjoyed! :)
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27th Jan 2014 11:59am
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27th Jan 2014 4:29am
Rare is the man that stands this honorably for the women ,, :) Curtsy to you, Poetik *adoring you*
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27th Jan 2014 12:02pm
Aaaaawwww well I'll tell you a secret
I have several other 'rare' brothers in my family with the very same feelings as me! :) thank you so much my dear
I'm truly grateful for all your support :)
I have several other 'rare' brothers in my family with the very same feelings as me! :) thank you so much my dear
I'm truly grateful for all your support :)
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27th Jan 2014 12:03pm
Atakti, I only hope I didn't 'shout' too loud n hurt your ears! lol
Thank you my friend, appreciate the support always :)
Thank you my friend, appreciate the support always :)
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27th Jan 2014 8:45am
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27th Jan 2014 12:05pm
Mami, you make my day always! :) thank you
for the unyielding sweet support always! :)
for the unyielding sweet support always! :)
Re: Real Beauty...
Oh, I love it, Poe. That's a beautiful ode to women, so insightful and tenderly written, my friend. Looking for the beauty inside, too, is a good decision since when you're going to spend your lives together, men and women should expect more from each other than a hollow shell although beauty on the outside shouldn't be an impediment :-). Like it a lot!
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27th Jan 2014 12:07pm
I love your feedback, n agree with your Statement
on men n women 100! Thank you sweetness
you're the best! :)
on men n women 100! Thank you sweetness
you're the best! :)
Re: Real Beauty...
27th Jan 2014 1:05pm
Bravo my brother...hip hip hooray to what you say...I stand and cheer with you and your brothers :)
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27th Jan 2014 2:50pm
Thank you bro. I'm happy to know you have my back
N overjoyed to know you're a like minded bro. Too! :)
Appreciate you always :)
N overjoyed to know you're a like minded bro. Too! :)
Appreciate you always :)
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27th Jan 2014 2:05pm
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27th Jan 2014 3:12pm
Thank you my sweetness, I'm happy it made you happy :)
N truly appreciate you n always :)
N truly appreciate you n always :)
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2014 2:13pm
Pleasure to read something beautiful. (Too many Barbie doll mutilators writing poems. This is relief and I thank You.)
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27th Jan 2014 3:30pm
Ur so sweet Atrina! Thank u, truly appreciate you my dear :)
Btw, lovely pic... Ur eyes r beautiful :)
Btw, lovely pic... Ur eyes r beautiful :)
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2014 2:54pm
Not too many men would be this frank about their inner thoughts about the complexities of the relationship and ties to women.
This is one superb piece PIKM, absolutely fabulous, thank you so much for writing it so beautifully and truthfully!!
This is one superb piece PIKM, absolutely fabulous, thank you so much for writing it so beautifully and truthfully!!
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27th Jan 2014 3:31pm
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27th Jan 2014 11:50pm
Thank you so much for writing from your inside... I wish more could emulate you and the beautiful words that you place before us... how to make a lady feel special xx
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28th Jan 2014 00:31am
Aaaawww ur words are too sweet... Thank you my friend, appreciate your support :)
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28th Jan 2014 10:45am
Wow, what a lovely response to my ink!
Thank you so beautiful, I'm just speaking how
I feel, happy it was enjoyable for you n appreciate you
so much :)
Thank you so beautiful, I'm just speaking how
I feel, happy it was enjoyable for you n appreciate you
so much :)
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28th Jan 2014 4:56am
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28th Jan 2014 11:06am
Sweet lady I thank you so much
happy to know you liked this n appreciate your continued
Support always :)
happy to know you liked this n appreciate your continued
Support always :)
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28th Jan 2014 11:54am
Couldn't agree more or put it better brother. A fan of your work Mr Poe.
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28th Jan 2014 1:54pm
Mr. Poe huh? lol dagg I feel 'stately' lol
But truly, I'm humbled n very deeply grateful for your amazingly generous commentary always bro!'
But truly, I'm humbled n very deeply grateful for your amazingly generous commentary always bro!'
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31st Jan 2014 5:34am
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31st Jan 2014 4:11am
Very nice to hear a man appreciate all the levels of beauty that make up a real woman. Well written!
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31st Jan 2014 5:35am
Aaaawwww thank you my friend, happy you enjoyed n I'm grateful for your thoughts n support on my ink :)
Re: Real Beauty...
10th Feb 2014 3:48pm
Awesome write! It does my heart good to hear there are men like you who appreciate a real woman.
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10th Feb 2014 5:13pm
Thank you :) btw I personally know 2 others for a fact that feel the same way, my younger bros! lol truly, appreciate your support my friend :)
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10th Feb 2014 5:36pm
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11th Feb 2014 6:43pm
Well I could go on and on about how i feel about this poem but truth is you know im a FAN. So what I will say is THANK YOU for again never disappointing me.
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11th Feb 2014 11:18pm
Well my legendary beauty! Hey, trust I'm a FAN of ur ink too!
Thanks so much my dear, I will continue to try my best to never disappoint
n appreciate you much :)
Thanks so much my dear, I will continue to try my best to never disappoint
n appreciate you much :)