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Lord, Protect Them...
Lord of mine, I hope you hear.
Only you can silence my fear.
Right now I feel I need to say this.
Don’t want to count on hope, or a wish.
Praying, to you is sure worth a try.
Right now we really need you, that’s no lie.
Only you truly control this world in which we live.
Thanking you in advance, for the assist you give.
Everything now is scarier than years past.
Calling on you lord... send help fast!
Tell my heart something, to put me at ease...
Tell me will atrocities in the world ever come to cease?
Hear my prayer lord please, and soon respond...
Everyone that has KIDS, can see this concern.
My prayer for them? long life & happiness well earned!
Only you can silence my fear.
Right now I feel I need to say this.
Don’t want to count on hope, or a wish.
Praying, to you is sure worth a try.
Right now we really need you, that’s no lie.
Only you truly control this world in which we live.
Thanking you in advance, for the assist you give.
Everything now is scarier than years past.
Calling on you lord... send help fast!
Tell my heart something, to put me at ease...
Tell me will atrocities in the world ever come to cease?
Hear my prayer lord please, and soon respond...
Everyone that has KIDS, can see this concern.
My prayer for them? long life & happiness well earned!
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Re: Lord, Protect Them...
29th Jan 2014 5:52am
Very heart felt prayer. Worthy of praise. HE always hears when we call on His name. Never leaves our side. Great write! :)
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29th Jan 2014 11:31am
Thank you, n trust n believe I haven't forgotten you dude
It's pretty hard to get in as many reads/comments as I'd like
nowadays, been getting erratic internees problems n very odd work hours...I will get there though, promise :)
It's pretty hard to get in as many reads/comments as I'd like
nowadays, been getting erratic internees problems n very odd work hours...I will get there though, promise :)
Re: Lord, Protect Them...
29th Jan 2014 6:40am
Another side of you I haven't seen.....
I am enjoying the discovery of you through your poetry...... :) <3
I am enjoying the discovery of you through your poetry...... :) <3
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29th Jan 2014 11:33am
Yea, well I've gone this direction a few times
But I admit I don't like to make people feel like in "preaching"
so I keep it at a minimum! lol thank you sweetie, truly appreciate you :)
But I admit I don't like to make people feel like in "preaching"
so I keep it at a minimum! lol thank you sweetie, truly appreciate you :)
Re: Lord, Protect Them...
29th Jan 2014 6:57am
I do believe I hear Mahalia Jackson singing...
Love the distinction you make between a hope, a wish, and a prayer.
Love the distinction you make between a hope, a wish, and a prayer.
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29th Jan 2014 11:37am
Oh yea, let her sing bro! Let her sing! lol
Thanks so much, much appreciate your support :)
Thanks so much, much appreciate your support :)
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29th Jan 2014 8:31am
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29th Jan 2014 11:38am
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That's a prayer we truly need.
You've mentioned mankind's atrocity
and I think it will get even worse
since mankind is degenerating socially.
Intense and authentic write, Poe!
You've mentioned mankind's atrocity
and I think it will get even worse
since mankind is degenerating socially.
Intense and authentic write, Poe!
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29th Jan 2014 4:19pm
Yes I agree, socially corrupt, n veering on the edge
total collapse... Thank you dear, uhm did you notice it was an ACROSTIC too? lol... Appreciate u always :)
total collapse... Thank you dear, uhm did you notice it was an ACROSTIC too? lol... Appreciate u always :)
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29th Jan 2014 2:50pm
sincerity and faith, the size of mustard seed gives the ability to do for ourselves and cast mountains into the depths of seas...thank you for sharing this piece...<3 it!
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re: Re: Lord, Protect Them...
29th Jan 2014 6:49pm
Yes yes, I so hear you lady! Thank you
my sweet one, truly appreciate you much :)
my sweet one, truly appreciate you much :)
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29th Jan 2014 6:31pm
Amen! Amen! Amen!
I adore this poem! Thank you for sharing such beautiful ink...Xo
http://youtu.be/nSI37Qif-LY
I adore this poem! Thank you for sharing such beautiful ink...Xo
http://youtu.be/nSI37Qif-LY
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re: Re: Lord, Protect Them...
29th Jan 2014 6:52pm
Rain, showering my page with her wonderous entity! N me
Dancing gleefully in her pour! lol thank you sweetheart
I'm grateful always :)
Dancing gleefully in her pour! lol thank you sweetheart
I'm grateful always :)
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6th Feb 2014 6:08pm
Thank you! I'm very much concerned bout the future of our children in these maddening times, appreciate your thoughts