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the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
before the big
(such an inelegant
(like the word
inelegant) word
to describe the
start of everything)
bang, did god
get a reminder that
there is no subject
no message no game
to gage the stakes
but do you still want
to send it anyway
a roll of the dice
(not yet cliché )
yet somehow
the house was
destined to win
heads or tales
to be or she loves
me not to be
cancel or send
one and the same
the start
the end
(such an inelegant
(like the word
inelegant) word
to describe the
start of everything)
bang, did god
get a reminder that
there is no subject
no message no game
to gage the stakes
but do you still want
to send it anyway
a roll of the dice
(not yet cliché )
yet somehow
the house was
destined to win
heads or tales
to be or she loves
me not to be
cancel or send
one and the same
the start
the end
Written by
0913338
(Semaj)
Published 24th Jan 2014
| Edited 13th Apr 2020
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Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
24th Jan 2014 5:25am
jackpot. omnipotence will definitely get you banned from the casinos...
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re: Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
26th Jan 2014 6:50am
Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
24th Jan 2014 6:52am
i'll see your e-mail and raise you hand written letters.
thanks for a great read Semaj
thanks for a great read Semaj
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re: Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
26th Jan 2014 6:54am
my hand bleeds haikus on old round stones, the mail carrier says mountains are too heavy, we know the mind can lift anything
Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
1st Aug 2019 2:04am
Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
24th Jan 2014 11:45am
re: Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
26th Jan 2014 6:57am
as in, in an infinite universe of possibility there is a probability(chance) that if it can happen it will, making every chance an eventual reality
Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
24th Jan 2014 5:48pm
re: Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
26th Jan 2014 7:01am
All the things I'm missin'
Good vittels, lovin', kissin'
Are waiting at the end of my ride
Move 'em on, head' em up
Head 'em up, move' em on
Move 'em on, head' em up
Rawhide
Good vittels, lovin', kissin'
Are waiting at the end of my ride
Move 'em on, head' em up
Head 'em up, move' em on
Move 'em on, head' em up
Rawhide
Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
25th Jan 2014 1:55am
Wow! Different, unique and oh so wonderful to read! Really love the flow of this...
Nice work, Semaj! Xo
Nice work, Semaj! Xo
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re: Re: the metaphysics of of las vegas and e-mail explained
what can one do with a ! and the O in wOw me wonders? bows in gratitude for the rain that drenches my box with words. thank you.