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This Kiss
she found him
and he found her
in such darkness
when they had their
eyes blankly open
her mind stopped
thinking about hate
wanting his lips upon
hers so he could
enjoy her madness
he wanted her to feel
his strength while he
bruised her cherry lips
with his sharing their
secrets with a lip lock
and he found her
in such darkness
when they had their
eyes blankly open
her mind stopped
thinking about hate
wanting his lips upon
hers so he could
enjoy her madness
he wanted her to feel
his strength while he
bruised her cherry lips
with his sharing their
secrets with a lip lock
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Re: This Kiss
24th Jan 2014 3:18am
"eyes blankly open"
this is a great line
the most intimate of acts, the kiss
nice Tommie
this is a great line
the most intimate of acts, the kiss
nice Tommie
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24th Jan 2014 3:28am
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24th Jan 2014 3:37am
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24th Jan 2014 3:58am
BUT
I write so many poems
on the kiss
I miss
that those have been read
by many, many and many
more than I may ever be able to kiss
My kisses fly across the Internet
as a jet flies
across the skies
So I kiss every human
all my while
as my kisses fly by
Some try to catch just one
and have fun
That's why I say
deprivation breeds
like a manure
it does a human feed
I write so many poems
on the kiss
I miss
that those have been read
by many, many and many
more than I may ever be able to kiss
My kisses fly across the Internet
as a jet flies
across the skies
So I kiss every human
all my while
as my kisses fly by
Some try to catch just one
and have fun
That's why I say
deprivation breeds
like a manure
it does a human feed
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Re: This Kiss
24th Jan 2014 3:50am
If that's where I'm lip locked Angel. Banish the locksmiths. You've got me. XO
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Hell yes Twitch, and you've got me.This makes me happy, thank you love.And thank you for the RL add... XO
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24th Jan 2014 3:55am
Re: This Kiss
24th Jan 2014 3:56am
Holy hell tommie, what beautiful madness you give us! Damn right, lip lock please!
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Re: This Kiss
24th Jan 2014 7:15am
The power of a kiss well described. I like this passage best:
"her mind stopped
thinking about hate
wanting his lips upon hers"
Brava Tommie!
"her mind stopped
thinking about hate
wanting his lips upon hers"
Brava Tommie!
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24th Jan 2014 12:40pm
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24th Jan 2014 11:52am
Mmmmmm all I can say is who wouldn't wanna be liplocked
with such a beauty? Sweet stuff spilled T! :)
with such a beauty? Sweet stuff spilled T! :)
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24th Jan 2014 12:42pm
Re: This Kiss
24th Jan 2014 11:59am
bruised cherry lips...sharing secrets...with a lip lock.
Your poetry: Can you liquefy it and send me a bottle? :)
Your poetry: Can you liquefy it and send me a bottle? :)
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