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Making Love to the Blue Moon
She was mystical
magic, ready to sacrifice
her spiritual body
for anything, for love,
for life, for death,
dancing madly her
hands interlaced
stretched upwards making
love to the blue moon,
her white dress flowed
with the sway of her
bouncing hips,
moonbeams shined
through showing off
her womanly figure,dropping
one arm at a time,
gliding her hands smoothly
over her breasts, through her
wild hair, down her neck
than back to the
blue moon,
throwing her head back
letting the light
kiss her face,
pulling her hands into her
warmth than into her
mouth, chanting and moaning
feeling the heat rise up
to the moon,
she floated freely while
the moon loved her back.
magic, ready to sacrifice
her spiritual body
for anything, for love,
for life, for death,
dancing madly her
hands interlaced
stretched upwards making
love to the blue moon,
her white dress flowed
with the sway of her
bouncing hips,
moonbeams shined
through showing off
her womanly figure,dropping
one arm at a time,
gliding her hands smoothly
over her breasts, through her
wild hair, down her neck
than back to the
blue moon,
throwing her head back
letting the light
kiss her face,
pulling her hands into her
warmth than into her
mouth, chanting and moaning
feeling the heat rise up
to the moon,
she floated freely while
the moon loved her back.
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Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 2:57pm
"she floated freely while
the moon loved her back." such a gentle romantic ending!
the moon loved her back." such a gentle romantic ending!
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 5:13pm
Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 3:01pm
Sensual and spiritual. A lovely mix in this ink my dear. I watched her move behind your words. Your imagery perfect babe. Thank you TL. XO
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 5:16pm
Glad you could see her Twitch, she moves beautifully! I always look forward to your words, thank you love. XO
Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 4:36pm
Captivation piece, euphoric dance for the night as the moon beams lit her stage with glows of love.
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16th Jan 2014 5:17pm
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16th Jan 2014 5:35pm
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 6:30pm
Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 5:43pm
pulling her hands into her
warmth ....then ...!into her
mouth, chanting and moaning
feeling the heat rise up
this happens daily
twice ..thrice xxxx times a day
BLUE MOON cums once in a way
in two or three years they say
hope u do more than u may
warmth ....then ...!into her
mouth, chanting and moaning
feeling the heat rise up
this happens daily
twice ..thrice xxxx times a day
BLUE MOON cums once in a way
in two or three years they say
hope u do more than u may
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 6:32pm
re: re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
17th Jan 2014 3:18am
Yeah
my words sway
all still have it
in their own way
with wild imagination
all play
and as cumming is essential
they try to follow
my doorway
and ask
which way....
still enjoy your today
tomorrow may,
may not cum
our desired way
my words sway
all still have it
in their own way
with wild imagination
all play
and as cumming is essential
they try to follow
my doorway
and ask
which way....
still enjoy your today
tomorrow may,
may not cum
our desired way
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Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 5:44pm
Aaaaawwww Tommie this is a truly beautiful, dreamy write! Awesome my friend :)
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 6:32pm
Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jan 2014 8:12pm
16th Jan 2014 8:11pm
nyce won....I wanna make luv tew veenus and da moon....use won of dem devyces ;/ rM

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16th Jan 2014 8:28pm
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16th Jan 2014 8:51pm
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16th Jan 2014 8:59pm
Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 10:06pm
Mesmerizing words, T. Such a cool idea for a poem and masterfully executed. I was lulled into a state of serenity, nice!
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
16th Jan 2014 10:12pm
Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
17th Jan 2014 1:50am
Nothing like the warmth of a celestial lover ... you've captured it wonderfully
LSP
LSP
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17th Jan 2014 1:54am
Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
17th Jan 2014 2:22am
beautifully painted, Tommie. she's in love w/her freedom & her spirit, dancing in ecstacy in the blue night...
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
17th Jan 2014 3:06am
Ahh yes John.Your words are very much appreciated, thank you for taking the time to read me.
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21st Jan 2014 4:55am
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Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
22nd Jan 2014 4:43am
Ooh how i love the imagery here and how u painted this masterpiece very beautiful
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re: Re: Making Love to the Blue Moon
22nd Jan 2014 6:13am