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Inked Escape
Letters inked on his fingers
spelling hope
I wanted to trace each
one with my tongue
traveling up his wrist
in gray wash a snake
wrapped around a
nettle bush
My eyes stung following
the slithering creature
through the needles
his forearm painted in
every color imagined
I placed my warm
touch to his
feeling my name with
my fingertips he silently
breaths saying my name
into my pulsing neck
taking my hands in his
locking our fingers together
he takes my flesh and I'm
wrapped around him
inside my passage I feel his
scars the ones he never really
wanted and his embrace
becomes tighter
his need for me intensifies
with each thrust he delivers
I give him exactly what he
needs pulling him in and
we transcend into each others
escape
spelling hope
I wanted to trace each
one with my tongue
traveling up his wrist
in gray wash a snake
wrapped around a
nettle bush
My eyes stung following
the slithering creature
through the needles
his forearm painted in
every color imagined
I placed my warm
touch to his
feeling my name with
my fingertips he silently
breaths saying my name
into my pulsing neck
taking my hands in his
locking our fingers together
he takes my flesh and I'm
wrapped around him
inside my passage I feel his
scars the ones he never really
wanted and his embrace
becomes tighter
his need for me intensifies
with each thrust he delivers
I give him exactly what he
needs pulling him in and
we transcend into each others
escape
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Re: Inked Escape
16th Jan 2014 6:06pm
taking my hands in his
locking our fingers together
he takes my flesh and I'm
wrapped around him
his need for me intensifies
with each thrust he delivers
I give him exactly what he
needs pulling him in and
we transcend into each others
escape
just enough
I think
to be at the river's brink
very good ink
locking our fingers together
he takes my flesh and I'm
wrapped around him
his need for me intensifies
with each thrust he delivers
I give him exactly what he
needs pulling him in and
we transcend into each others
escape
just enough
I think
to be at the river's brink
very good ink
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16th Jan 2014 6:35pm
Lol...thank you A.I truly appreciate your words. And thanks for adding this to your RL.
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16th Jan 2014 6:52pm
I OFFER
Appreciation where it is deserved
that's why DUP has given me
a Star medal
ur poetry is excellent
Appreciation where it is deserved
that's why DUP has given me
a Star medal
ur poetry is excellent
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16th Jan 2014 9:30pm
I was born
to a world of kindness
but all that I find around
are unkind
you have a broader mind
thanks the genes
you inherited
your parents must be
proud of you
to a world of kindness
but all that I find around
are unkind
you have a broader mind
thanks the genes
you inherited
your parents must be
proud of you
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16th Jan 2014 6:48pm
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2014 8:10pm
dam dats hawter den hades! rm
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2014 9:45pm
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16th Jan 2014 10:17pm
I appreciate you reading me and your great comment YoungPat, thank you so much.
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17th Jan 2014 5:46am
Oh this was a beautiful erotic piece, Lynn! :)
You've weaved so many sensual lines together. Very nice!Xo
Pen love~
You've weaved so many sensual lines together. Very nice!Xo
Pen love~
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