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L.A.
your footprints are everywhere and all around
but so many of them can be found in this town
your perfume lingers forever here
I miss you so much in this atmosphere
L.A. is very aware of your flair
visions of yours are looking down from midair
we both know the creation behind
this is the language of your beautiful mind
deeply your soul reveals itself to me
baby, aren't you glad
I see intuitively..... <3
but so many of them can be found in this town
your perfume lingers forever here
I miss you so much in this atmosphere
L.A. is very aware of your flair
visions of yours are looking down from midair
we both know the creation behind
this is the language of your beautiful mind
deeply your soul reveals itself to me
baby, aren't you glad
I see intuitively..... <3
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Re: L.A.
15th Jan 2014 1:50pm
Well this reads as a lil mysterious BUT also very sweetly too
I like it, nice, smooth m, n rhythmic flow to this ink!
Brava my friend :)
I like it, nice, smooth m, n rhythmic flow to this ink!
Brava my friend :)
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15th Jan 2014 4:26pm
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Re: L.A.
16th Jan 2014 5:53am
very beauiful ink, Scarlet, I like the rhythmic and the rhymes! and the last verse "I see intuitively..... ". Bravo!
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16th Jan 2014 6:49pm
It makes me happy when people get my poetry....
Thank you for your kind comment.....:)
Thank you for your kind comment.....:)
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16th Jan 2014 8:24pm
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19th Jan 2014 6:55am
Sorry if I haven't yet, sweetie.....
I 'll make sure to read and comment....
I am following so many poets here, sometimes it is hard to keep up..... :)
I 'll make sure to read and comment....
I am following so many poets here, sometimes it is hard to keep up..... :)
Re: L.A.
17th Jan 2014 4:38am
Great write sweets!!
Your perfume lingers forever here- Great line!!
Way too swing that pen sweets!!!
Sir Lancelott
Your perfume lingers forever here- Great line!!
Way too swing that pen sweets!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: L.A.
19th Jan 2014 7:01am
Thank you so much for your encouraging comment.
It means a lot to me coming from you, because as you know I am a huge fan of your erotic poetry. :)
It means a lot to me coming from you, because as you know I am a huge fan of your erotic poetry. :)
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19th Jan 2014 7:25pm
Re: L.A.
19th Jan 2014 5:03am
"deeply your soul reveals itself to me
baby, aren't you glad
I see intuitively"<--aww....love those lines, Scarlet! Nice flow luv....Xo
baby, aren't you glad
I see intuitively"<--aww....love those lines, Scarlet! Nice flow luv....Xo
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19th Jan 2014 6:58am
Thank you my love...
I am indeed glad I see intuitively,and I think he is as well....
I am indeed glad I see intuitively,and I think he is as well....