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Poseidon's Love Song
Living in your dreams,
Come true-
I only say,
I love you!
You fancied your palace,
Of yellow roses-
I plucked them,
For your medley dozes,
And you sank in my,
Boat of love…
Abyss, abyss,
And abyss,
Where darkness,
Nowhere exists,
My faith kindled,
Your heart-
Your breath,
Dwindled me fart…
Living in your dreams,
Come true-
I only say,
I love you!
Yesterday night I had a dream. I dreamed of my love in her fascinating journey to her abyss, an abyss that let her met her own soul to her very love to me. She was sinking like a crazy girl enjoying every bit of her fall because she fulfilled her dreams. I watched her constantly and intensely because I was her soul and when she came closer to me I was blown away by the storm of her breath.
Come true-
I only say,
I love you!
You fancied your palace,
Of yellow roses-
I plucked them,
For your medley dozes,
And you sank in my,
Boat of love…
Abyss, abyss,
And abyss,
Where darkness,
Nowhere exists,
My faith kindled,
Your heart-
Your breath,
Dwindled me fart…
Living in your dreams,
Come true-
I only say,
I love you!
Yesterday night I had a dream. I dreamed of my love in her fascinating journey to her abyss, an abyss that let her met her own soul to her very love to me. She was sinking like a crazy girl enjoying every bit of her fall because she fulfilled her dreams. I watched her constantly and intensely because I was her soul and when she came closer to me I was blown away by the storm of her breath.
Published 14th Feb 2011
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- Edited 14th Feb 2011 2:24pm
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16th Feb 2011 8:54am
Maybe you can wish to ma GF not BF:-)...You are right that they are best words for somebody ever....
15th Feb 2011 2:12pm
16th Feb 2011 8:53am
Maybe Ophie...I don't know that they are sweet, for me they are the correct placement of such words in my poem where the characters are fictious, plus my feelings...my imaginary feelings. Well I hope that you have liked the poem.
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2011 2:33am
Please forgive me for not having commented on your work in a while, my friend. This was a rather charming piece, a cheeky, witty and sometimes moving love poem, combining a boyish humour with some intense imagery ("palace of yellow roses" being my favourite).
24th Feb 2011 10:09am
You are always welcome Jack, and you can read them anytime you like. With such finest comments from you I am always studded, each and evry time:-)