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Cigarettes and Joints
Cigarettes are like shadows
They're always there
Like friends
or almost..
They're there when you wake up,
and for the rest of the day.
Almost like joints
MJ opens up your mind and eyes, but
a million cigarettes won't change the way we feel.
And still, we smoke cigarettes
Because they're always there
Like friends
or almost
They're always there
Like friends
or almost..
They're there when you wake up,
and for the rest of the day.
Almost like joints
MJ opens up your mind and eyes, but
a million cigarettes won't change the way we feel.
And still, we smoke cigarettes
Because they're always there
Like friends
or almost
Published 14th Feb 2011
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14th Feb 2011 8:19pm
16th Feb 2011 7:16am
16th Feb 2011 5:48am
You described the realtionship between smoke and smoker
quite masterfully. well done i love it
quite masterfully. well done i love it
16th Feb 2011 7:15am
Hey thanks..I actually totally dig your poems and style. I'm here because I read one of your poems and decided that poetry is an great way to express thoughts and feelings. And one of your poems just captured me, so thanks again.
21st Feb 2011 7:07pm
very well put. pithy and to the point. I once heard a friend in despair accuse another friend that they "treat their friends like a pack of cigarettes." ..something to lean against momentarily, but in the end, disposable.
