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Strike The Match
If he was on fire
I wouldn't piss on him
I'd watch him burn
I'd be the one that smoked his ass in the first place
I wouldn't piss on him
I'd watch him burn
I'd be the one that smoked his ass in the first place
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Re: Strike The Match
Anonymous
11th Jan 2014 9:51pm
bragger lol rM!
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12th Jan 2014 00:05am
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12th Jan 2014 00:13am
some how
though i am not on ur reading/friends list
i like ur poetry
experience tis
though i am not on ur reading/friends list
i like ur poetry
experience tis
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12th Jan 2014 1:02am
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12th Jan 2014 1:45am
Yes GW...we(women) call it chard dick!!LMAO!You have a way, too damn funny.
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12th Jan 2014 1:48am
I would never profit from it..the only thing that would make me happy is sharing that moment with friends!And then lighting a cigarette off his burning flesh!LOL...thanks HD :)
Re: Strike The Match
14th Jan 2014 11:32pm
Whoa! Few words but you managed to get it all in there, lol. I enjoyed reading this one, even if it's just a few seconds. This is one of those innovation, inventive type of poem thing. Not sure if that made any sense but anyways, I enjoyed it. :)
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re: Re: Strike The Match
15th Jan 2014 00:02am
Glad you liked it Hallucinostic, thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate it! :)
re: re: Re: Strike The Match
15th Jan 2014 00:26am
You're welcome, like I said, I enjoyed it. Pretty sure this won't be the last poem that I'll be reading from you so keep 'em coming, ok? :)
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