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WONDER
When I was hungry, you gave me your bread.
When I was lonely, your bed.
Your breasts were my coronet
And kisses crowned my head
And I shall live in wonder
All the days of my life
For never shall I squander
The love of my life.
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8th Jan 2014 2:52am
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 10:47am
Short, but sweet, sometimes a miracle lasts only a certain time, blessed are the miracles!
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 3:36pm
nawt hungree anymooore rM
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9th Jan 2014 11:57am
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2014 5:25am
Awwww I'm a sucker for this kind of writing. Simplistic but beautiful and well written. <3
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12th Jan 2014 6:06pm
I know, I know Silvia, sometimes you've eaten to much cordon bleu and need something simple
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jan 2014 2:23am
18th Jan 2014 1:29am
Beautiful tribute to a special person. Just how luv is supposed to be. Always there! Enjoyed! :)
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25th Feb 2014 1:20am
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