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Haiku 3-5-3 (2014-01-04)
No more noise
Deafening silence
Un ange passe
"Un ange passe" = "There is a hushed silence"
The picture is from F'mur, a french cartoonist with "Alpage's genius", a serial cartoon about thinking ewes - here an angel-dog inflating his violin
Published 4th Jan 2014
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4th Jan 2014 10:24am
4th Jan 2014 11:24am
I am not sure that the translation of "un ange passe" is that, I just have find it on internet! But it is nice, yes. Thank you for your comment, Pishashee!
4th Jan 2014 10:43am
More and more, I love to mix languages, when I can do that! I don't have find the correct picture to illustrate this Haiku, but I'll probably scan how F'mur included this quote in his cartoon, very funny!
Thank you Mia for your comment!
Thank you Mia for your comment!
4th Jan 2014 11:35am
4th Jan 2014 11:41am
4th Jan 2014 1:14pm
4th Jan 2014 1:31pm
Thank you so much, Miss Chi!
The idea of this haiku was when I was writing to somebody and I understood how the weight of silence is hard to live!
I am not sure of the correct expressions and hope to have used the correct ones!
The idea of this haiku was when I was writing to somebody and I understood how the weight of silence is hard to live!
I am not sure of the correct expressions and hope to have used the correct ones!
Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 4:27pm
I like the mix of languages and more often than not the languages never translate in true form.
If silence can be measured in weight, it will crush a human being into a fine sand.
Very nice haiku Malin, with a very strong message!
If silence can be measured in weight, it will crush a human being into a fine sand.
Very nice haiku Malin, with a very strong message!
4th Jan 2014 4:30pm
I love this sentence "If silence can be measured in weight, it will crush a human being into a fine sand". Thank you for your feedback... Yes better to use the original to the translation!
Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 00:25am
Lovely lines ... waiting and silence are always tough
