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Memories of My First, Second & Third Wife
Her twig-
A ferocious goblet of fire,
That once burned my desire,
In the tiny blemishes that bled.
Her tears-
Reacted like nitric acid,
Corroding our fake homes pallid,That soaked every smoke between souls.
Her cunt-
Became the chalice of profuse disease,
That kept me away from natural release,
Like some yellow lady in Connecticut*.
*Yellow Lady in Connecticut- A rare wild flower in that region
MMFSTW is a hardcore poetic fiction. The poet exaggerates three characteristic features of a woman as his wife individually because of the hidden complexities behind them the poets of our times long ago explored. The first wife is symbolized as the comfort giving nature of a woman that gathers dry and solid twigs from the jungle to enlighten and provide warmth to her family that ignores her hard work and struggles and frequently disgraces her. Yet she carries on her duty till she bleeds on her efforts. The second quality wife is depicted in the form of tears flowing down the cheeks of a woman. The bitterness of the salt caused from her tears have concentrated acid powers equivalent to nitric acid that can burn or faint a house that evokes the same. But the feminine tear is a precious boon as well with salts of happiness and sacrifice in it. The third and foremost essential feature of a woman qualifies her as a wife as well. It is her obsessive sexual organ that betrays adult idealism and mostly confines a man to responsible captivism once indulged in it. The magical pleasure is vigorous and binds eternal against the manhood cherished freedom from moral conduct and marital responsibility.
A ferocious goblet of fire,
That once burned my desire,
In the tiny blemishes that bled.
Her tears-
Reacted like nitric acid,
Corroding our fake homes pallid,That soaked every smoke between souls.
Her cunt-
Became the chalice of profuse disease,
That kept me away from natural release,
Like some yellow lady in Connecticut*.
*Yellow Lady in Connecticut- A rare wild flower in that region
MMFSTW is a hardcore poetic fiction. The poet exaggerates three characteristic features of a woman as his wife individually because of the hidden complexities behind them the poets of our times long ago explored. The first wife is symbolized as the comfort giving nature of a woman that gathers dry and solid twigs from the jungle to enlighten and provide warmth to her family that ignores her hard work and struggles and frequently disgraces her. Yet she carries on her duty till she bleeds on her efforts. The second quality wife is depicted in the form of tears flowing down the cheeks of a woman. The bitterness of the salt caused from her tears have concentrated acid powers equivalent to nitric acid that can burn or faint a house that evokes the same. But the feminine tear is a precious boon as well with salts of happiness and sacrifice in it. The third and foremost essential feature of a woman qualifies her as a wife as well. It is her obsessive sexual organ that betrays adult idealism and mostly confines a man to responsible captivism once indulged in it. The magical pleasure is vigorous and binds eternal against the manhood cherished freedom from moral conduct and marital responsibility.
Published 10th Feb 2011
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Anonymous
10th Feb 2011 11:27am
I think this may be the best poem that I have seen from you. Its very well thought out and is constructed with great discipline,
A really good read,
Thanks
S
A really good read,
Thanks
S
10th Feb 2011 12:03pm
like i said before : your best poems are yet to come!
you brought to life themes i never thought existed, metaphors and words combined with such a strict structure that fit so delicately with one another.
and the footnote in the end is more than necessary thanks for providing it!
you brought to life themes i never thought existed, metaphors and words combined with such a strict structure that fit so delicately with one another.
and the footnote in the end is more than necessary thanks for providing it!
12th Feb 2011 10:37am
Wow...wow...wow...I am almost jumping and jumping Ophie...This is the best ever comment I have ever recieved in my life against any of my works...do keep praising me, and definitely after every work I will say my best is yet to come...& double motivation to me for adding this one again:-)...will catch you after some of my assignments...
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10th Feb 2011 5:43pm
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12th Feb 2011 10:39am
Thank you so much Mr holdit for adding that one despite of being the variety out of your portfolio...and thank you so much for all your praises and compliments:-)
11th Feb 2011 8:02am
The cunt becoming a chalice of profuse disease is a thought provoking metaphor. I thought and thought and thought about it. Each time, agreeing with you.
This is a fine poem.
This is a fine poem.
12th Feb 2011 10:38am
You are absolutely right Divine...I strictly adhered each and every word to suit the mood in the poem & I am glad that you have noticed that.
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