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Bear with me
Please bear with me
while I adjust my view
you know baby
all along
it's been you
so text me
sex me
rhyme me
write me
suck me
fuck me
til we cum
you really are ten men in one
the world is spinning
we' re on the run..... <3
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Re: Bear with me
29th Dec 2013 3:57pm
Mmmmmm you sound so hungry! lol
But damn I like it :) a short but very nicely expressed passionate inkspill! :)
But damn I like it :) a short but very nicely expressed passionate inkspill! :)
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re: Re: Bear with me
29th Dec 2013 9:06pm
It makes me very happy to hear you praise my poetry and yes I am "hungry"....... ;)
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2nd Jan 2014 10:07pm
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3rd Jan 2014 00:23am
Thank you so much for your appreciation of this poem....
He and I are in fact in contact and are trying to run to each other instead of away from each other... :)
He and I are in fact in contact and are trying to run to each other instead of away from each other... :)
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4th Jan 2014 5:04am
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2014 2:50am
Wow! You have done wonders for she go here for sure. Very sexy. :)
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Re: Bear with me
12th Jan 2014 00:14am
The use of the word bear brought a smile here! Just like the perfect porridge the poem isn't too hot, not too cold but just right.
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Re: Bear with me
12th Jan 2014 3:07pm
There is a lot of symbology behind language and the way it is used..... some people are very adept at reading and writing the language behind the language..... ;)
I make use of symbology somtimes intentionally and sometimes as if by chance..... :)
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.....
I make use of symbology somtimes intentionally and sometimes as if by chance..... :)
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.....
Re: Bear with me
13th Jan 2014 8:03pm
sex me
rhyme me
write me
suck me
fuck me
til we cum /.....
and
cum with me ------------------
may sound better
as both yell
its cumming cumming
can all DUP hear it
cumming then
swieeeeeeshhhhhhhhhhhhhh
rhyme me
write me
suck me
fuck me
til we cum /.....
and
cum with me ------------------
may sound better
as both yell
its cumming cumming
can all DUP hear it
cumming then
swieeeeeeshhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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14th Jan 2014 1:24am
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14th Jan 2014 5:22pm
FEELINGS ARE MUST
ERE NO EFFECT OF ANY THRUST
THIRST FIRST
THRUST NEXT
THEN THEY ALL BUST
THRUST THRUST AND THRUST
NOTHING CUMS
ELSE !
ERE NO EFFECT OF ANY THRUST
THIRST FIRST
THRUST NEXT
THEN THEY ALL BUST
THRUST THRUST AND THRUST
NOTHING CUMS
ELSE !
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15th Jan 2014 7:45am
If I am reading what you are saying here, I agree with you
that having strong feelings for someone such as love, can turn ordinary into extraordinary as far as the act of sex.... :)
that having strong feelings for someone such as love, can turn ordinary into extraordinary as far as the act of sex.... :)
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