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FALL
The rising wind blows in the Fall,
Falling on The Rise, acorns small.
Children’s breaths arise and fall.
Night falls and dreams surprise
Falling lids on raisin eyes...
All dreams rise, fall and rise.
Rise and fall, means nothing at all.
Falling on The Rise, acorns small.
Children’s breaths arise and fall.
Night falls and dreams surprise
Falling lids on raisin eyes...
All dreams rise, fall and rise.
Rise and fall, means nothing at all.
Published 29th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2013 6:47am
Really like the sentence....
"The rising wind blows in the Fall"
It reminds me of old nursery rhymes
"The rising wind blows in the Fall"
It reminds me of old nursery rhymes
29th Dec 2013 10:58am
29th Dec 2013 11:16am
29th Dec 2013 11:29am
30th Dec 2013 9:58am
whimsical. rising so high, to return to the ground. our dreams go in circles, around & around...
30th Dec 2013 11:10am
Beautifully put - Thanks JF - acorns become oaks and grapes become raisins - all good
