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This is all because of you
You said you’d never hurt me
You said you’d never leave me
You said you’d always love me
You lied
And now you've forgotten me
Look at me now
I’m broken hearted
And I'm sitting here sobbing
Thinking to myself
What went wrong?
We were so happy together
Now the pain is killing me
So I press a blade to my pale arm
Silently thinking of you
I take a sharp breathe as
Deep red blood like a river
Flows slowly down my arm
Now do you understand?
This is what it has come to
This is all because of you
You said you’d never leave me
You said you’d always love me
You lied
And now you've forgotten me
Look at me now
I’m broken hearted
And I'm sitting here sobbing
Thinking to myself
What went wrong?
We were so happy together
Now the pain is killing me
So I press a blade to my pale arm
Silently thinking of you
I take a sharp breathe as
Deep red blood like a river
Flows slowly down my arm
Now do you understand?
This is what it has come to
This is all because of you
Published 9th Feb 2011
| Edited 20th Sep 2011
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9th Feb 2011 6:08am
This is really good but I think you should put just a little bit more feeling into the beginning instead of just you lied. Everyone has their own view on poetry.
24th Feb 2011 1:22am
9th Feb 2011 4:24pm
That is all I could think of to say at first.
This poem is so just breath taking and mind scrambling to me. Something so simple just knocked me on my ass.
This poem is so just breath taking and mind scrambling to me. Something so simple just knocked me on my ass.
24th Feb 2011 1:22am
30th Dec 2013 1:44am
