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GOING
No passengers alight
No passengers bereft;
The midnight flight.
Right suitcase left.
On the luggage
The message showing:
You don’t need baggage
Where you’re going.
No passengers bereft;
The midnight flight.
Right suitcase left.
On the luggage
The message showing:
You don’t need baggage
Where you’re going.
Published 27th Dec 2013
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27th Dec 2013 11:26am
I like the playfulness of the words in your poems...
Normally don't care for rhyme, but it works well here.
:)
Normally don't care for rhyme, but it works well here.
:)
27th Dec 2013 12:03pm
Anonymous
27th Dec 2013 2:26pm
I like this a lot. I'm actually moving packing everything taking a plain. So I think I liked this much more than I would on an ordinary day. But all in all, your poem is much more wittier and deeper than my experience. Wonderfully written. <3
27th Dec 2013 11:11pm
Anonymous
28th Dec 2013 5:47am
When the going gets gone...tossing around the words
28th Dec 2013 5:01pm
