deepundergroundpoetry.com
Fucking Die
Life, what the fuck is life?
Love, what the fuck is love?
Happiness, what the fuck is happiness?
I don’t know, do you?
No, because you know fuck all,
Your heads all fucked up,
Your mind has been twisted,
Your head filled with shit,
It’s not your life your living,
Wake up you thick bastards,
Open your fucking eyes,
Listen to me,
Because their full of shit,
Full of their love and happiness,
Full of their fucking god,
What a load of bollocks,
Their full of guilt,
Full of sadness,
Full of pain,
Their fucking insane,
Full of shit and more shit,
So take your tablets,
Take them all at once,
Kill your fucking self,
Fucking die,
Fucking die,
Do what I want to do, and fucking die,
Don’t cry, please don’t cry, just fucking die.
Love, what the fuck is love?
Happiness, what the fuck is happiness?
I don’t know, do you?
No, because you know fuck all,
Your heads all fucked up,
Your mind has been twisted,
Your head filled with shit,
It’s not your life your living,
Wake up you thick bastards,
Open your fucking eyes,
Listen to me,
Because their full of shit,
Full of their love and happiness,
Full of their fucking god,
What a load of bollocks,
Their full of guilt,
Full of sadness,
Full of pain,
Their fucking insane,
Full of shit and more shit,
So take your tablets,
Take them all at once,
Kill your fucking self,
Fucking die,
Fucking die,
Do what I want to do, and fucking die,
Don’t cry, please don’t cry, just fucking die.
Published 8th Feb 2011
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 0
reading list entries 0
comments 3
reads 847
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
8th Feb 2011 5:12pm
8th Feb 2011 6:38pm
i sense some anger as well.
but in all seriousness, when you pound words like that, it's more of a shutting down feeling, of closing in or focusing instead of opening someone to a different way of thinking or seeing. although, the way you did it, it makes one feel that you're pounding in desperation and almost like you've broken down with the 'please', into tears at the end. i enjoyed that. thanks for the read. [:
but in all seriousness, when you pound words like that, it's more of a shutting down feeling, of closing in or focusing instead of opening someone to a different way of thinking or seeing. although, the way you did it, it makes one feel that you're pounding in desperation and almost like you've broken down with the 'please', into tears at the end. i enjoyed that. thanks for the read. [:
Anonymous
8th Feb 2011 10:04pm
Agreed with the last two comments, and unfortunately this is not an original comment, but I do sense anger and frustration that almost leads to a pleading desperation to be heard by someone; anyone.
