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~The Fear~
The fear
it tares
and kills
The fear
it breaks
and takes
when its done
you are nothing
when before you were something
you want to get away
to keep it at bay
but the fear is stronger
you must be prepared
to live no longer
it tares
and kills
The fear
it breaks
and takes
when its done
you are nothing
when before you were something
you want to get away
to keep it at bay
but the fear is stronger
you must be prepared
to live no longer
Published 7th Feb 2011
| Edited 8th Feb 2011
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7th Feb 2011 6:49pm
7th Feb 2011 6:52pm
thanks crimsin this peom is what being bored in math class looks like plus i have decided that im going to try and rid myself of my fears but it is easier said then done
Anonymous
8th Feb 2011 7:01pm
reminds me of the song, "The Fear" by Lily Allen. Inspiration perhaps? I like it though.
8th Feb 2011 7:04pm
8th Feb 2011 8:31pm
oohhh yeah and naw never herd that song before was just writing what i felt at that moment
Anonymous
8th Feb 2011 9:52pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kL6DlOQIwaY It's a good song you should check it out :]
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9th Feb 2011 6:42pm
"Ding ding ding! we have a winner here johnny"
Extroidinary work, congrats, I needn't say more.
Extroidinary work, congrats, I needn't say more.
9th Feb 2011 6:53pm
