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Black Angel
Feast on the flesh
ov God's demise
drink from the wounds
of seeping blood
and he shall die.
Like rats we breed
from wrath and war
to the mark of the devil
we are bound
Black Angel
arise!
Come forth from darkness
black angel arise
and drink from the chalice
of blood
remaining souls
shall fall to their kness
all hail to your throne
black angel
all hail to your throne!
From oceans
boiling tides will rise
the sun will freeze
and crystalize
and we shall die
mass human carnage
on all who oppose
will bring death
by a wall of fire
black angel arise!
Come forth from darkness
black angel arise
and feast on the flesh and bones
all remaining souls
shall fall to their knees
all hail to your throne
black angel
all hail to your throne!
ov God's demise
drink from the wounds
of seeping blood
and he shall die.
Like rats we breed
from wrath and war
to the mark of the devil
we are bound
Black Angel
arise!
Come forth from darkness
black angel arise
and drink from the chalice
of blood
remaining souls
shall fall to their kness
all hail to your throne
black angel
all hail to your throne!
From oceans
boiling tides will rise
the sun will freeze
and crystalize
and we shall die
mass human carnage
on all who oppose
will bring death
by a wall of fire
black angel arise!
Come forth from darkness
black angel arise
and feast on the flesh and bones
all remaining souls
shall fall to their knees
all hail to your throne
black angel
all hail to your throne!
Published 7th Feb 2011
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7th Feb 2011 1:51pm
Just wanted to say this one worked really. Vivid imagery and a powerful character throughout.
I see you are in a band...this is just begging to be a song. Is this the chorus?
Come forth from darkness
black angel arise
and feast on the flesh and bones
all remaining souls
shall fall to their knees
all hail to your throne
black angel
all hail to your throne!
if not, it should be.
Enjoyed the journey into darkness my friend,
Hooded
I see you are in a band...this is just begging to be a song. Is this the chorus?
Come forth from darkness
black angel arise
and feast on the flesh and bones
all remaining souls
shall fall to their knees
all hail to your throne
black angel
all hail to your throne!
if not, it should be.
Enjoyed the journey into darkness my friend,
Hooded
7th Feb 2011 9:17pm
yes, this is a song from our band Blood Machine (www.myspace.com/kill099)
I thought I marked it as a song, I'll check. Anyways, thsnks for the words.
I thought I marked it as a song, I'll check. Anyways, thsnks for the words.
7th Feb 2011 2:10pm
Ok, I have now heard this on myspace so i know it is a song already!
I am not too keen on Black Metal as often the words are lost in the noise. Your band have restored my faith in Black Metal...I can hear your words and this one has some power my friend.
regards,
Hooded
I am not too keen on Black Metal as often the words are lost in the noise. Your band have restored my faith in Black Metal...I can hear your words and this one has some power my friend.
regards,
Hooded
7th Feb 2011 9:19pm
I should have scrolled down before respoinding the first time..lol Yes I saw you were there and added you, we (I) apopreciate the friendship. Yes, we're not going for the "cookie cutter" black metal in which you can't understand words, what's the point in writing? So yeh, I'm with you there.
7th Feb 2011 9:34pm
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11th Feb 2011 1:56pm
are you getting my private messages? I replyed to yours but my history says I didn't?
24th Feb 2011 11:54pm
12th Mar 2011 3:56am
You have vary vivid imagery in this song when i read it i can see it all happening its vary good
