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WHEN ANGELS WEPT
( En Memorium~~12-14-12 )
Within our nation's heart this day,
Death cast its insidious shadow.
In morning's sacred sanctuary of bliss,
The Devil daringly defiled the sanctity of Light.
Into a fragile, fragmented mind,he transported a demon--
To release the reaper's rampage, to execute his will.
In the youthful face of evil incarnate,
Eyes of molten flame glazed...sanity shifted.
From within this vacuous shell,
It demanded purity of righteous blood...
One perfect tender soul exacted--one for each decade doubled.
In minutes of madness, and seconds of sorrow,
Moments of mayhem exploded--glass disintegrated,lives splintered.
Twenty, precious breaths of helpless innocents--
forever stolen....
Twenty, single, special smiles
forever treasured memories....
Twenty, voices clear as silver pixie bells--
forever silenced.
In brilliant beams of radiance golden,
Through the chaos crazed,
The keepers of mortal souls reached
To clasp tiny, trusting hands.
With feathered wings gently sheltering,
Heads bowed in grief inconsolable....
Amid anguish unbearable....
The angels wept this day.
Author's Notes: This poem is dedicated to ALL the victims of the heinous massacre at Sandy Hook Elementary School, in Newtown, CT. As the anniversary of this tragic even draws near, may we pause to honor the memories of these precious children,and the adult heroes who sacrificed their own lives, on their behalf.
May they know peace eternal.
Within our nation's heart this day,
Death cast its insidious shadow.
In morning's sacred sanctuary of bliss,
The Devil daringly defiled the sanctity of Light.
Into a fragile, fragmented mind,he transported a demon--
To release the reaper's rampage, to execute his will.
In the youthful face of evil incarnate,
Eyes of molten flame glazed...sanity shifted.
From within this vacuous shell,
It demanded purity of righteous blood...
One perfect tender soul exacted--one for each decade doubled.
In minutes of madness, and seconds of sorrow,
Moments of mayhem exploded--glass disintegrated,lives splintered.
Twenty, precious breaths of helpless innocents--
forever stolen....
Twenty, single, special smiles
forever treasured memories....
Twenty, voices clear as silver pixie bells--
forever silenced.
In brilliant beams of radiance golden,
Through the chaos crazed,
The keepers of mortal souls reached
To clasp tiny, trusting hands.
With feathered wings gently sheltering,
Heads bowed in grief inconsolable....
Amid anguish unbearable....
The angels wept this day.
Author's Notes: This poem is dedicated to ALL the victims of the heinous massacre at Sandy Hook Elementary School, in Newtown, CT. As the anniversary of this tragic even draws near, may we pause to honor the memories of these precious children,and the adult heroes who sacrificed their own lives, on their behalf.
May they know peace eternal.
Published 12th Dec 2013
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13th Dec 2013 00:15am
13th Dec 2013 00:57am
Thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read this piece, and for leaving your thoughts.....you know how much i appreciate this.
I hope to honor the memories of, ALL the victims, with this poem.
I hope to honor the memories of, ALL the victims, with this poem.
13th Dec 2013 00:24am
Tears in my eyes my lady...so sad.love to each and everyone and also their families,Your words have power,beauty and love. (peace)
13th Dec 2013 1:02am
My friend, i thank you ever so much for your lovely comments. Please be assured that i appreciate your your thoughtful words.
May their families experience solace.
May their families experience solace.
13th Dec 2013 1:20am
So sad and mournful of a precious loss to us all. Heartfelt as it is written. May they find peace.
13th Dec 2013 1:34am
Thank you, Jake, for your meaningful words....much appreciated.
may their memories live on the hearts of all whose lives they so surely blessed.
may their memories live on the hearts of all whose lives they so surely blessed.
Anonymous
13th Dec 2013 1:30am
What a beautiful tribute...poetically powerful...
13th Dec 2013 1:45am
SW, my friend, thank you so much for taking the time to read this piece, and for your gracious thoughts. Ever so appreciated, to be certain! Thank you, also, for adding this poem to your reading list....
What a lovely way to honor the memories of all those victims who lost their lives that horrible morning.
What a lovely way to honor the memories of all those victims who lost their lives that horrible morning.
13th Dec 2013 1:41am
It was a very sad moment.
Powerful words from my Sorceress!
Awesome write sweets!!
Beautiful tribute with that pen!!
Sir Lancelott
Powerful words from my Sorceress!
Awesome write sweets!!
Beautiful tribute with that pen!!
Sir Lancelott
13th Dec 2013 1:49am
Thank you so, so much, my knight, for taking the time to read this piece, and for your lovely comments....they honor the memories of All who lost their lives that sorrowful, dark day!
I appreciate your visit to my realm.
I appreciate your visit to my realm.
13th Dec 2013 5:33am
Gosh! I have a tear rolling down my cheek, Enchantress! Your pen has truly stirred up my emotions. Such tender beauty, yet dark and powerful images within this ink. A lovely tribute for such an horrific and sad moment in time. Thank you for sharing this creation in remembrance of those sweet angels...Xo
13th Dec 2013 2:24pm
Rain,My Friend,
Thank you, ever so much, for your generous, gracious comments. xo I truly appreciate the time you took read this piece, and for your heart-felt words....
In themselves, they are a special tribute to those beautiful little angels.
Thank you, ever so much, for your generous, gracious comments. xo I truly appreciate the time you took read this piece, and for your heart-felt words....
In themselves, they are a special tribute to those beautiful little angels.
16th Dec 2013 11:39pm
Words of a fine poet. The way you display this peeve should be viewed by all to see. I definitely will be tunning in and checking you out. Again great ink!
16th Dec 2013 11:48pm
I truly thank you for your generous, gracious, comments, and for taking the time to read my poem.
I sincerely appreciate your visit to my realm, and as i am honored by your thoughtful words....so do they honor the memory of All those victims whose lives were ended much too soon!
Sioch`ain leat mo Cara nua,
Enchantress
I sincerely appreciate your visit to my realm, and as i am honored by your thoughtful words....so do they honor the memory of All those victims whose lives were ended much too soon!
Sioch`ain leat mo Cara nua,
Enchantress
17th Dec 2013 12:55pm
17th Dec 2013 2:02pm
Thank you, Jasper. I truly appreciate the time you take to read, and comment, on my poetry.
My friend, that horrific day laid bare the emotions of not only our nation, but was felt throughout the world. Your thoughtful comment pays homage to all those victims, as well.
My friend, that horrific day laid bare the emotions of not only our nation, but was felt throughout the world. Your thoughtful comment pays homage to all those victims, as well.
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19th Dec 2013 4:12pm
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19th Dec 2013 7:29pm
You are soo right, Gabriel! All those lives that are so tragically impacted---lost to these senseless acts of incomprehensible violence.
Your gracious comments are sincerely appreciated, my friend. Thank you. xo
You have surely honored me, as well as the memories of ALL the victims, with your heart-felt thoughts.
Your gracious comments are sincerely appreciated, my friend. Thank you. xo
You have surely honored me, as well as the memories of ALL the victims, with your heart-felt thoughts.
28th Dec 2013 3:11am
It's such a tragic loss when lives are stolen, especially when children and young adults are targeted in such callous acts of violence.
This is a beautifully tribute written by a beautiful poet with a warm heart.
This is a beautifully tribute written by a beautiful poet with a warm heart.
28th Dec 2013 6:53pm
My heart-felt thanks, my Friend!
I am truly humbled--indeed-- by your gracious, generous comments!
For your words not only bring honor to me, but they honor the memories of ALL the victims who were robbed of their lives much too soon.
I am truly humbled--indeed-- by your gracious, generous comments!
For your words not only bring honor to me, but they honor the memories of ALL the victims who were robbed of their lives much too soon.
Anonymous
1st Feb 2014 1:28am
Such a graceful tribute to a tragic situation. Tears dripping. Thank you for a look at your precious heart. :)
1st Feb 2014 1:50am
Flowergirl,
I thank you--ever soo much--for your tender, touching comments, and for your visit to my realm.
Both are sincerely appreciated--to be sure!
Your tender, touching comments have brought tears to
m y eyes, and your words pay tribute to ALL those special individuals whose lives were ended soo senselessly....and much too soon.
I thank you--ever soo much--for your tender, touching comments, and for your visit to my realm.
Both are sincerely appreciated--to be sure!
Your tender, touching comments have brought tears to
m y eyes, and your words pay tribute to ALL those special individuals whose lives were ended soo senselessly....and much too soon.
Such a powerful and compelling piece of work, DE. I can't believe I missed this one! It's one of the most beautiful and well-written tributes I've ever read. I just love the style you chose and the way you adapted it to the feeling you wanted to share.
Most certainly the kind of work I adore reading. You should be proud. Skillfully penned!
Most certainly the kind of work I adore reading. You should be proud. Skillfully penned!
25th Jan 2015 11:10pm
O..Mo Chara Chotha`imid.....
I thank you, most much, for ALL of your gracious comments....I am soo humbled...i don't even know quite what to say...
except that your praise serves to honor all those, whose lives that were so tragically taken that horrific morning!
(I needed some way to express all of those intense emotions that seemed to overwhelm me, and creating a tribute became my means of coming to terms with the senseless atrocity).
I thank you, most much, for ALL of your gracious comments....I am soo humbled...i don't even know quite what to say...
except that your praise serves to honor all those, whose lives that were so tragically taken that horrific morning!
(I needed some way to express all of those intense emotions that seemed to overwhelm me, and creating a tribute became my means of coming to terms with the senseless atrocity).
22nd Sep 2017 2:23pm
I was immediately captivated by your words even not knowing the reference point. Such a sad and powerful write gripped me and kept me reading - the velvet glove knock out punch was in the authors note and then the realisation of what it was about made it even more powerful :-)
This was something special :-) Huge Big Hugs :-)
This was something special :-) Huge Big Hugs :-)
22nd Sep 2017 3:49pm
This was such a horrible, heinous tragedy! Even though this December 14th marks the fifth year, since all those lives were lost, in my mind, and heart, it still remains so painfully raw!! I felt that i needed to honor these individuals--to pay tribute to their lives...in at least some, small way. Thank you, my friend, for your very generous, and gracious comments! They touched me deeply, and i am humbled, grateful, and most appreciative.
