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'Delirious Dreamer'
It's another dream scenario
SMH, got me saying uh oh
there he go...
and whenever I get this feeling...
I'm 'verse agile'
and what sends me reeling
is when I see her smile
it sets me aflight to the moon...
and it's at that moment
my mind's might goes bright
alight...so again, I begin to swoon
...burrowing inside
sitting inside, for her
reserved, a personal space
As the emotions well up, it's
painting smiles across my face
for more room she wants
guess it's not much to ask
she may not have been first,
but she's the best, the last
That's how it is in my dreams,
lost in my heart, it's my baby
she embeds herself within
So deep, now I'm rock solid
and IF that were matter a fact
euphorically, I'd burst out joyously
flashing the biggest grin...[/b]
SMH, got me saying uh oh
there he go...
and whenever I get this feeling...
I'm 'verse agile'
and what sends me reeling
is when I see her smile
it sets me aflight to the moon...
and it's at that moment
my mind's might goes bright
alight...so again, I begin to swoon
...burrowing inside
sitting inside, for her
reserved, a personal space
As the emotions well up, it's
painting smiles across my face
for more room she wants
guess it's not much to ask
she may not have been first,
but she's the best, the last
That's how it is in my dreams,
lost in my heart, it's my baby
she embeds herself within
So deep, now I'm rock solid
and IF that were matter a fact
euphorically, I'd burst out joyously
flashing the biggest grin...[/b]
Published 12th Dec 2013
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12th Dec 2013 4:07pm
12th Dec 2013 4:24pm
Thank you sweetie, but of course it's just the Delirium
of feeling that way in my dreams lol appreciate you :)
of feeling that way in my dreams lol appreciate you :)
12th Dec 2013 6:15pm
"So deep, now I'm rock solid
and IF that were matter a fact
euphorically, I'd burst out joyously
flashing the biggest grin..."<--nice ending hon.
Such a sweet and lovely write...Xo
and IF that were matter a fact
euphorically, I'd burst out joyously
flashing the biggest grin..."<--nice ending hon.
Such a sweet and lovely write...Xo
13th Dec 2013 5:14am
My dear Rain, u know not how deeply I adore you!
Thank you sweet sexy you, truly appreciate you always :)
Thank you sweet sexy you, truly appreciate you always :)
12th Dec 2013 6:31pm
13th Dec 2013 5:16am
Aaaaawwww what an amazing n sweet comment! Thank you sweetheart, I'm deeply appreciative of ur support :)
12th Dec 2013 9:39pm
Lovely dream, indeed. You have such a sweet sensuous side and it really shines here:) nice*
13th Dec 2013 5:21am
13th Dec 2013 00:15am
13th Dec 2013 5:23am
Thanks hash, that vote of confidence is truly inspiring :)
Appreciate u tons bro! Peace n love to u my yours :)
Appreciate u tons bro! Peace n love to u my yours :)
Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 00:44am
awww I'm grinning from ear to ear for you Bro..a lovely dreamscape that you've invited us to flow through
14th Dec 2013 4:37am
Thanks bro. You n your awesome comments gonna get a brotha choked up! lol... Truly though ur the best dude n I appreciate you much :)
16th Dec 2013 00:59am
Beautifully written as always. Keep doing your thing and blessing us all with your art.
16th Dec 2013 4:03am
Gosh bro. I'm overwhelmed by your support n I feel guilty
I guess I'm gonna have go into ur archives
to find some hidden treasures :) thank as always :)
I guess I'm gonna have go into ur archives
to find some hidden treasures :) thank as always :)
19th Dec 2013 2:42pm
Beautiful...last and best love, the feeling is wonderful if only in a dream...
19th Dec 2013 3:59pm
Yea, I agree the thing about dreams are they are ideal
n reality is anything but! lol
Thank you sweet one, appreciate u :)
n reality is anything but! lol
Thank you sweet one, appreciate u :)
