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If only
If only the charade could end
If only we could both truly see
Time has come and gone
and yet we still spin circles...
Loving you doesn't seem the same...
Trusting you even harder!
Even with all the movement,
the chaos,
and utter disillusions...
I still cling to you!
I still desire you!
I still...
Simply I still...
If only we could both truly see
Time has come and gone
and yet we still spin circles...
Loving you doesn't seem the same...
Trusting you even harder!
Even with all the movement,
the chaos,
and utter disillusions...
I still cling to you!
I still desire you!
I still...
Simply I still...
Published 11th Dec 2013
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11th Dec 2013 2:37pm
charade, trusting, chaos, disillusions. If I had read this without knowing anything about the author I would say you are channeling Joni Mitchell!
Nice done!
Nice done!
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17th Mar 2014 4:04pm
I really like this.
Charade is the word that sticks out to me. I guess it's what I felt I have been put through.
Charade is the word that sticks out to me. I guess it's what I felt I have been put through.
17th Mar 2014 4:21pm
22nd Mar 2014 3:09pm
If only...in our life these words are often uttered, in vain. Good read niknshell.
24th Mar 2014 12:02pm
