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a bloody pen
If I have to write you out of my life
one line at a time
that is what I will do
when I wake from a dream
where your lips were a fury
that caressed the heartache you made
I will wake from that dream
and write you away,
putting out fires
with my fingertips
as you once extinguished
the fire of your love/hate
on my skin,
I will mend your broken promises
with a bloody pen
and never take you in,
never again
one line at a time
that is what I will do
when I wake from a dream
where your lips were a fury
that caressed the heartache you made
I will wake from that dream
and write you away,
putting out fires
with my fingertips
as you once extinguished
the fire of your love/hate
on my skin,
I will mend your broken promises
with a bloody pen
and never take you in,
never again
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Re: a bloody pen
Anonymous
5th Dec 2013 6:14am
This creates some fantastic imagery... I love the idea of writing somebody away.
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re: Re: a bloody pen
19th Dec 2013 4:07pm
writing this person out of my life was the best decision I ever made!! and the idea of it actually kind of worked because I used writing to remind me of all of the things my idealistic heart wanted to forget about.
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5th Dec 2013 11:43pm
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11th Dec 2013 11:38pm
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19th Dec 2013 4:06pm
thank you, I'm glad that feeling is apparent in this. when I wrote it I was feeling very conflicted!
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15th Dec 2013 00:44am
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Re: a bloody pen
Anonymous
19th Dec 2013 4:02pm
Oh ya.....writing the pain away. Been there tried it. Still writing! Great piece. Keep on! :)
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re: Re: a bloody pen
19th Dec 2013 4:09pm
I hear that! I'm still writing too, all the time, it is my favorite way to work things out :)
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2013 4:33pm
Let it flow....you're doing great! :)
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