You and Me

Thanks

You are most kind in your comments.

PS

Love that..it's all there.

Thanks brother.

Simple and to the point.  no complications.

take it any day of the week.

thx for commenting.

oh, to have this!!

awesome write :)

thanks so much.
it's out there.  grab it if you can.

perfect. i'm going to have to stop commenting on all your old stuff. i'm going to give you a big head, cowboy. and i can't stand for that.

(but, god! it really is good.)

it won't swell that much, I can hardly get it through a door as it is, so not much more room to go

this was a fragment I took from another poem.  thought it could stand up by itself

thx

is the rest posted here? i'm curious now.

I have to look

This is very true, these words make me think of the whole theater of a relationship. It's warming to read.

Thank you so much for going back to my beginnings as a writer ...

It's one of my favorite offerings

Appreciate

Hi,
I like peoples earlier stuff, the raw stuff, Its like music I always like bands first albums.

Totally agree !
I'm always trying to get people to read my early stuff
It's my most organic when I was writing more through emotion then for an audience ...

Absolutely charming!

Wow, you went back
Love
One of my personal favorites
You see me

Thanks LJ

I keep digging and finding treasures you left with your mind.  
May your inkwell ink well.

Bat

I love that you keep going back to my poetry beginnings on DUP.  It's 10 years now.  

Thank you Sir Bat !!

Btw .. this is one of my personal favorites !

That's great, I'm glad to know that.

Bat