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Your skin (ta peau)
The delicacy of your skin, soft as the silk
My fingers touch her, caress her, wheedle her
Deep vibrations all in my body, in my soul
Intense echo for our bodies, magnificent orgasm
La délicatesse de ta peau, douce comme la soie
Mes doigts l'effleurent, la caresse, la cajole
Vibrations au plus profond de mon corps, de mon âme
Intense résonance de nos corps, splendide orgasme
Published 30th Nov 2013
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30th Nov 2013 10:27am
everything always reads so beautifully in French... a wonderfully sensual piece Malin.
30th Nov 2013 10:53am
Thank you, Mia for your comment, I know how you like french words... First I would like to write an Haiku, but too big! And I write it in french and translate it in English.
30th Nov 2013 11:13am
does it lose much in translation? I know when I write in other languages and translate it, some words do not have as much poetic meaning in English.
I think that I can't use same romantic expressions in English than in French, not because of the languages, but because of my weak knowledge of English words. But it is true that French is a romantic language, too!
The best is to mix languages, as you have done with Fenom/DoL in your last collaboration. I'll try again.
The best is to mix languages, as you have done with Fenom/DoL in your last collaboration. I'll try again.
30th Nov 2013 6:47pm
30th Nov 2013 8:44pm
Anonymous
1st Dec 2013 2:35am
I really love this. You have great flow and diction here. Well done.
1st Dec 2013 2:40am
