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A 'New Age Pauper...'
I have nothing...
but, I'll give you all I can
scrapping together two pennies
wishing them dollars
to place into your grateful hand
I have nothing...
except the shirt 'pon my
soiled, heavy labor strewn' back
take it...as I pray whatever material
remains, as testament to strive for
more of what I lack
I have nothing...
proof positive...I simply survive
dreaming to one day...to truly 'live'
I should be ashamed to want,
to expect you, to want me
as I struggle, 'ends' never meat
tabled reality for a second
on a fantasy ride
I have nothing...
so far be it for anyone to ever understand
there are no fancy cars, expensive
vacation getaways, swollen bank
accounts...just a huge consistently abused
heart bursting with passionate love
in the depth's of this particular man...
but, I'll give you all I can
scrapping together two pennies
wishing them dollars
to place into your grateful hand
I have nothing...
except the shirt 'pon my
soiled, heavy labor strewn' back
take it...as I pray whatever material
remains, as testament to strive for
more of what I lack
I have nothing...
proof positive...I simply survive
dreaming to one day...to truly 'live'
I should be ashamed to want,
to expect you, to want me
as I struggle, 'ends' never meat
tabled reality for a second
on a fantasy ride
I have nothing...
so far be it for anyone to ever understand
there are no fancy cars, expensive
vacation getaways, swollen bank
accounts...just a huge consistently abused
heart bursting with passionate love
in the depth's of this particular man...
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Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
27th Nov 2013 4:26pm
Your pain is felt as well as your passion in this write Poe.. great inking.. much love Crim
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re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
27th Nov 2013 4:39pm
Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
27th Nov 2013 7:13pm
The poems I deem great make me think of songs often. This is no exception. Elton John's "Your Song" is the most prominent. Also hear a bit of Eric Clapton's "Pilgrim.
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re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
27th Nov 2013 7:53pm
Love your comment bro! I'm honored as well n yea Elton's piece is classic! not sure I heard/recall Claptons piece. Appreciate u always :)
Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
27th Nov 2013 8:17pm
wow what a nice piece poet.. I loved it..ur emotional write is sensational..
yes gotta agree with jazz 'your song' is totally relatable
write on..
cyanide..
yes gotta agree with jazz 'your song' is totally relatable
write on..
cyanide..
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re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 1:08pm
Gosh bro. Thanks so much, needless to say I'm humbled n truly grateful for your sincerely wonderful comment n continued support, peace n love to you dude :)
Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
27th Nov 2013 9:46pm
re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 1:10pm
Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 00:44am
Your 'NoThInG' to someone else may be 'EvErYtHiNg' to them!
Love is loving someone mentally, emotionally, spiritually and physically; never materialistically! Really digging this piece....Xo
Love is loving someone mentally, emotionally, spiritually and physically; never materialistically! Really digging this piece....Xo
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re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 1:12pm
Aaaaawwww well I'm really digging the Rain lady digging my ink! :) sincerely, you're wonderful n I feel blessed always for your support... :)
Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 12:19pm
Passionate write, Poe. And I
swear I'd rather be with someone
who has a big heart than a big bank account.
A truely poignant poem.
swear I'd rather be with someone
who has a big heart than a big bank account.
A truely poignant poem.
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re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 1:13pm
Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 6:10pm
last line says it all :) now thats true wealth..wonderfully penned poetik..enjoyed!!
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re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
28th Nov 2013 7:01pm
Thank you my sweetheart, grateful for your sweet comment
n your continued support always!
n your continued support always!
re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
14th Dec 2013 11:21am
Yes they are :) but hey the question is
Did you like then? lol anywho, thank you
my sweetness, appreciate your support so much :)
Did you like then? lol anywho, thank you
my sweetness, appreciate your support so much :)
Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
14th Dec 2013 3:42pm
re: Re: A 'New Age Pauper...'
14th Dec 2013 4:02pm
So wonderful of you to say my sweetness...
What more? Gosh, you sure aren't like the females I grew up around lol... Thank you so much for your thoughts n support, I'm grateful always :)
What more? Gosh, you sure aren't like the females I grew up around lol... Thank you so much for your thoughts n support, I'm grateful always :)