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i am the cheese (title formerly used in book by robert something or other)
i want to hurt you
it feels so wrong, not me
i want to love you
feels so right, so free
fuck off means never leave me
stuck with you like mold on cheese
i am the cheese
it feels so wrong, not me
i want to love you
feels so right, so free
fuck off means never leave me
stuck with you like mold on cheese
i am the cheese
Published 30th Jan 2011
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30th Jan 2011 5:07pm
30th Jan 2011 5:15pm
30th Jan 2011 6:06pm
I never imagined the line 'i am the cheese' could carry so much weight :) I like this...it's a little bit strange, but bold.
love this! seemed like i found
someone with the same mind drift...haha!
and this:
fuck off means never leave me
-a familiar sentiment!
someone with the same mind drift...haha!
and this:
fuck off means never leave me
-a familiar sentiment!
31st Jan 2011 4:58am
Anonymous
5th Feb 2011 4:06pm
the sense in this? BUT ..it feels good.
I'm sure this comment doesnt make sense in itself, so I'll just say,
"I like the poem"
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I'm sure this comment doesnt make sense in itself, so I'll just say,
"I like the poem"
s
