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1 more time for me
would you help me out
if you can
jack and jim and the jones
are at it again
sweet july
whatever happened in that time
i guess i apologize
stare at the sun
till all i see is light
i fuck up like i get paid for it
i can sure as hell get you a job too
murder
mercy
the hungry type
the wonder whys'
try to make a sling shot
out of who i used to be
you would'nt think so
but i know exactly where i'm headed
if you can
jack and jim and the jones
are at it again
sweet july
whatever happened in that time
i guess i apologize
stare at the sun
till all i see is light
i fuck up like i get paid for it
i can sure as hell get you a job too
murder
mercy
the hungry type
the wonder whys'
try to make a sling shot
out of who i used to be
you would'nt think so
but i know exactly where i'm headed
Published 23rd Nov 2013
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Anonymous
23rd Nov 2013 9:43pm
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23rd Nov 2013 10:40pm
Apologizing for what we can't rember sounds like a lot of of us.
But this this make total sense. We do a lot if wondering why and we all screw up but that's life and you described it in a way most can't I like this. ...
Thanks for the read. :)
But this this make total sense. We do a lot if wondering why and we all screw up but that's life and you described it in a way most can't I like this. ...
Thanks for the read. :)
24th Nov 2013 00:46am
Jack jim and the jones
are at it again
That's unfortunate mate, we never know where we're headed, don't be so sure.
are at it again
That's unfortunate mate, we never know where we're headed, don't be so sure.
24th Nov 2013 5:46am
nice lines in some if the paces .. my favorite being
' murder
mercy
the hungry type'
nice piece overall ,liked it..
keep Rollin
cyanide..
' murder
mercy
the hungry type'
nice piece overall ,liked it..
keep Rollin
cyanide..
