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Wave of Intimacy
When I look at your mouth
I try to picture my lips on yours
An exquisite tongue dance
All of our longing colliding in a wave of intimacy
Holding you close knowing our moments are brief
An erotic coupling for those who dared…
I try to picture my lips on yours
An exquisite tongue dance
All of our longing colliding in a wave of intimacy
Holding you close knowing our moments are brief
An erotic coupling for those who dared…
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20th Nov 2013 3:04pm
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 3:51pm
So sensual these lines are:
When I look at your mouth I try
to picture my lips on yours
When I look at your mouth I try
to picture my lips on yours
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2015 2:57am
those who dare have the best time.
like this, cowboy. :)
like this, cowboy. :)
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17th Mar 2015 3:03am
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2015 3:05am
your wise ass-ness of your latest made me remember that you are also quiet the romantic. thought i'd go take a gander. :)
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Re: Wave of Intimacy
21st Mar 2015 5:12pm
Looks like a few of us are taking the "PoetSpeak" tour, haha.
This a sweet sensual write.
This a sweet sensual write.
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21st Mar 2015 5:33pm
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2018 12:19pm
And dare will be... great ink!
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2nd Nov 2018 12:27pm
Wow, going way back
One of my earliest entries and a personal favorite
Thank you !!
One of my earliest entries and a personal favorite
Thank you !!
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25th Jun 2021 3:06am
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Re. Wave of Intimacy
20th Sep 2021 4:17pm
So beautifully written. It brought me to my many days and nights of longing to feel the warm breath of an admired person on my face.awesome.
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20th Sep 2021 4:35pm
Wow, you went way back
I’m impressed and I thank you DaddyScruff
Welcome to the madness
I’m impressed and I thank you DaddyScruff
Welcome to the madness
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lol I really have no rhyme or reason how I find stuff. I believe so many stay on the first page of life in general and miss out on the meat and potatoes. I’m quite impressed with this writing. I have a whole new world to discover. Thank you for sharing your work. And thank you for the welcome!
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20th Sep 2021 7:12pm
It’s a wild place
Lots of good writers
A lot of opportunities to engage with others
Lots of good writers
A lot of opportunities to engage with others