deepundergroundpoetry.com
Transit Dreams
Transit dreams
Seat by the window
Autumn foliage
Bursts of crimson
Orange too
Summer fading
Winter on the horizon
Chestnuts
Pumpkins
Apple cider
Simple comforts
A good bottle of red
Light Jackets
Your favorite sweater
The autumn light
Dog tails wagging
Cat sleeping in her spot
Seasons change
Lives march on
Take the time
Enjoy the view ...
Seat by the window
Autumn foliage
Bursts of crimson
Orange too
Summer fading
Winter on the horizon
Chestnuts
Pumpkins
Apple cider
Simple comforts
A good bottle of red
Light Jackets
Your favorite sweater
The autumn light
Dog tails wagging
Cat sleeping in her spot
Seasons change
Lives march on
Take the time
Enjoy the view ...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 1
comments 18
reads 920
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re: Transit Dreams
20th Nov 2013 1:57pm
Re: Transit Dreams
20th Nov 2013 2:05pm
Good Morning
and
Thank you !!!
Another one that kind of wrote itself once it got going.
This is my gentle side emerging.
and
Thank you !!!
Another one that kind of wrote itself once it got going.
This is my gentle side emerging.
re: Re: Transit Dreams
20th Nov 2013 3:42pm
love the balance in your writing of the softer side and the darker side. always look forward to reading more!
0
Re: Transit Dreams
20th Nov 2013 3:19pm
I love this such a beautiful scene you've painted.. I could just fall into it.. beautiful!!! much love Crim
1
Re: Transit Dreams
20th Nov 2013 3:30pm
Re: Transit Dreams
Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 3:48pm
I love Fall myself and you
captured it nicely here...we should
all just take some time and enjoy
those simple times....
captured it nicely here...we should
all just take some time and enjoy
those simple times....
0
Re: Transit Dreams
20th Nov 2013 4:50pm
Yes, autumn is a great time in the Northeast.
So much color and crisp air.
Of course winter follows, that's another story.
Many poems of isolation and stark visions probably to follow.
Thanks for your comments.
So much color and crisp air.
Of course winter follows, that's another story.
Many poems of isolation and stark visions probably to follow.
Thanks for your comments.
Re. Transit Dreams
10th Jan 2018 2:02pm
Superb write
it takes me riding on a train or a bus,being free of concentration of the road to wonder
"Autumn foliage
Bursts of crimson "- killer imagery painted in these lines
well picked titled
and it also makes me think of that song
passenger by Iggy pop
it's pretty good
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hLhN__oEHaw
i really need to take a bus trip, or at least a vacation lol.
great write PoetSpeak
it takes me riding on a train or a bus,being free of concentration of the road to wonder
"Autumn foliage
Bursts of crimson "- killer imagery painted in these lines
well picked titled
and it also makes me think of that song
passenger by Iggy pop
it's pretty good
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hLhN__oEHaw
i really need to take a bus trip, or at least a vacation lol.
great write PoetSpeak
0
Re. Transit Dreams
10th Jan 2018 10:18pm
Wow, you went way back into my early poems.
I think my early stuff was some of my most organic thoughts
Thank you !!!!
I think my early stuff was some of my most organic thoughts
Thank you !!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
3rd Jul 2020 2:41pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Transit Dreams
3rd Jul 2020 3:04pm
I appreciate that you are reading my early poems.
They are my best I believe.....
Thank you for looking under my hood.
It was my beginning as well .....
They are my best I believe.....
Thank you for looking under my hood.
It was my beginning as well .....
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
3rd Jul 2020 3:07pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Transit Dreams
3rd Jul 2020 3:18pm
The rest of me is spread out over 1000 + poems here. There’s a lot of me to choose from, some prettier than others .....
Re. Transit Dreams
14th Oct 2020 3:36pm
I forgot all of that.
I'm in court soon 13 charges of breach of the peace act 2010 ..
Oops.
Whatever
Thanks for the reminder.
I'm in court soon 13 charges of breach of the peace act 2010 ..
Oops.
Whatever
Thanks for the reminder.
0
Re. Transit Dreams
25th Jun 2021 3:05am
Re: Re. Transit Dreams
25th Jun 2021 4:00am
you found me again
Wish I could do this now
Subway is feared
Bus is still supreme but slow
Message same
Thank you urban woman ....
Wish I could do this now
Subway is feared
Bus is still supreme but slow
Message same
Thank you urban woman ....
Re. Transit Dreams
6th Oct 2021 12:21pm
dear Poet Speak
inkwells and autumn Transit well here
a warm smile
silent lotus
inkwells and autumn Transit well here
a warm smile
silent lotus
0
Re: Re. Transit Dreams
6th Oct 2021 12:26pm
Back at my early poems again
That was really writing
Thank you for your visits
That was really writing
Thank you for your visits