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Binary Stars
(A collab: Petit Minou & Atakti )
Come,
uncover secrets with me
come where the moon
meets the sky,
in sensuous, shimmering lines,
where bared propositions
tempt traces along your
silken promises.
Come,
speak with me
of hidden agendas
launched behind our eyes.
Spoken with long glances,
mute invitations of mine
are aligned, possessed…
unfolded.
I feel you tremble, torn
between want and doubt…
Come with me, spin
into radial arms' warmth.
Your lashes flicker, disarm me
inside, where my will
is eclipsed by your
smiling hands.
Come,
fly with me
in naked winds of solar flares,
where brushed touch trails
feathered heat, our hitching
breaths sear starlight gazes
into every tomorrow,
sanctified.
Come,
set the cosmos alight…
I see the promise of hereafter
in the passion of the now.
Atomic energy swells, rippled
waves smoothing circles,
my rising pulsar rhythms
pleasing yours.
Come,
I'll draw you in, warp reality…
let my body bend your body
to create the double star.
Arched nebulae swirl
in spectral diffusion under
comet streaks licking
your heavens.
Come,
let me taste the nova’s
rising heat radiating
from your core.
Interstellar delights
nibbled, drawing elixirs
through digital orbits,
twinned gasps.
Brighter
than galaxies we burn, hotter, denser.
Consumed by our own boundless fire,
a billion stars burst from the flame.
Our celestial spheres shudder
with shock after shock
of runaway supernovae
explosions.
Passion's fuel spent,
flares to embers die
we collapse into darkness
once more.
Entered in the comp "DU Swingers Party: SENSUAL POWER"
Come,
uncover secrets with me
come where the moon
meets the sky,
in sensuous, shimmering lines,
where bared propositions
tempt traces along your
silken promises.
Come,
speak with me
of hidden agendas
launched behind our eyes.
Spoken with long glances,
mute invitations of mine
are aligned, possessed…
unfolded.
I feel you tremble, torn
between want and doubt…
Come with me, spin
into radial arms' warmth.
Your lashes flicker, disarm me
inside, where my will
is eclipsed by your
smiling hands.
Come,
fly with me
in naked winds of solar flares,
where brushed touch trails
feathered heat, our hitching
breaths sear starlight gazes
into every tomorrow,
sanctified.
Come,
set the cosmos alight…
I see the promise of hereafter
in the passion of the now.
Atomic energy swells, rippled
waves smoothing circles,
my rising pulsar rhythms
pleasing yours.
Come,
I'll draw you in, warp reality…
let my body bend your body
to create the double star.
Arched nebulae swirl
in spectral diffusion under
comet streaks licking
your heavens.
Come,
let me taste the nova’s
rising heat radiating
from your core.
Interstellar delights
nibbled, drawing elixirs
through digital orbits,
twinned gasps.
Brighter
than galaxies we burn, hotter, denser.
Consumed by our own boundless fire,
a billion stars burst from the flame.
Our celestial spheres shudder
with shock after shock
of runaway supernovae
explosions.
Passion's fuel spent,
flares to embers die
we collapse into darkness
once more.
Entered in the comp "DU Swingers Party: SENSUAL POWER"
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Re: Binary Stars
Anonymous
18th Nov 2013 8:01pm
Two DUP Powerhouses! Not my usual cuppa, but so engaging and alluring. I can sense the differnt voices, but they meet so well and offer treats for the brain and the body! Bravo! Mike.
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19th Nov 2013 5:07am
Here's Mike with his lovely comments... Thank you, I am glad you liked it. Petit is a great collab partner.
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18th Nov 2013 8:09pm
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18th Nov 2013 8:23pm
I agree this is out of this world passion so masterfully penned!!! Bows to the two of you :) peace Crim
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Anonymous
18th Nov 2013 8:45pm
It was truly a pleasure as well as a lot of fun - Thanks so much for the fireworks! =)
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19th Nov 2013 5:13am
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19th Nov 2013 5:27am
That means a lot, John, from a writer with such sensual ink. Thank you from both of us...
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19th Nov 2013 5:29am
Such sweet feedback, Soul. I'm just glad my ink kept up with Petit's! Thank you.
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Anonymous
- Edited 19th Nov 2013 11:24am
19th Nov 2013 11:22am
Almost like an esoteric sensual write...
Very much veiled in mystery, well scripted, Atakti and Petit!!!
Great co write!!!
Very much veiled in mystery, well scripted, Atakti and Petit!!!
Great co write!!!
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19th Nov 2013 1:37pm
So pleased you like it, Mourganna... yes, a little bit of mystery from the both of us!
Thank you.
Thank you.
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 7:36pm
binaree meens tu--nyce rite! rm
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2013 1:19am
Beautiful, superb job by both of you!!
Good luck in the comp :)
Good luck in the comp :)
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14th Dec 2013 5:59am
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22nd Jun 2015 6:16am
How beautiful and grateful I am to have crossed this. No words just pure admiration for both for creating this.
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22nd Jun 2015 7:10am
Thank you...
It has been along time since anyone shook the dust off this poem.
Thanks for noticing and reading.
It has been along time since anyone shook the dust off this poem.
Thanks for noticing and reading.
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Anonymous
25th Sep 2015 11:16am
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