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Thought Drop: spitting to the point
Goodie
goodie
gumdrop
see how
the masses plop
crashing on
their asses
all day
Goodie
goodie
they won't prop-
the- gander
as they slander
the human pop.
-elations,
wasting relations
shipped n'
chopped
shopped
for their stations
in life each day
skippy
dippy do
don't know
'bout you
but I'm quick-
witted to
mouth off
a thought to
just...
spit it
out the way....
goodie
gumdrop
see how
the masses plop
crashing on
their asses
all day
Goodie
goodie
they won't prop-
the- gander
as they slander
the human pop.
-elations,
wasting relations
shipped n'
chopped
shopped
for their stations
in life each day
skippy
dippy do
don't know
'bout you
but I'm quick-
witted to
mouth off
a thought to
just...
spit it
out the way....
Published 18th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
18th Nov 2013 5:15pm
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18th Nov 2013 6:21pm
18th Nov 2013 6:05pm
Feel like the flow of this is perfect for spoken word--wish it was longer--you had me going and then...out of the way! :) Good ink!!
18th Nov 2013 6:24pm
Thank you! Yea I was actually thinking of doing a video with this but then I guess I changed my mind lol
N yea the length was intentional, hence the 'thought drop' :)
Thanks a ton my dear friend, appreciate ur support :)
N yea the length was intentional, hence the 'thought drop' :)
Thanks a ton my dear friend, appreciate ur support :)
18th Nov 2013 6:52pm
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18th Nov 2013 9:02pm
18th Nov 2013 9:05pm
Yea BUT u got that "goodie goodie" lol
Thank u sweet lady, truly n always appreciate you :)
Thank u sweet lady, truly n always appreciate you :)
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19th Nov 2013 1:24am
Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 4:57am
haha dude! i love ya..just take that for what its worth..:)
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